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Hyper Star


Here to write stories and am always up for a warm cup of tea. TwinkiePie is best!

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Pinkie asks for Rarity’s help confessing her feelings to Twilight. Rarity is an avid reader of old romance novels, naturally this means she thinks she knows exactly how to charm a pony.

This can only go wrong.


Random story I wrote, matchmaker Rarity is very fun to write.

Inspired by Leave No Trope Unturned

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

This was really cute, and I loved it! :heart:
:pinkiesmile:

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Thanks! Getting a comment from a user who’s written a bunch of fics that I love is an honour.

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It's an honour to inspire, and I'm excited to read whatever you write next!
:twilightsmile:

I think you meant for the title to be "How Not to Confess to an Alicorn". The way you have it suggests the story is about someone refusing to confess.

Comment posted by Hyper Star deleted April 4th

This so cute!please write more twipie!

Aww that was adorably silly^^

“Seems like we need Plan C. Let’s leave, the effects should wear off after a while.”

Wasn't the potion Plan C?

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Fixed, atleast I think, who knew rearranging just two scenes could lead to such a frustrating process of going "Okay so this plan D, unless it’s C, wait but this is A where is B?"

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Thanks!

“'I love you' doesn’t necessarily mean you love somepony romantically, I’m always telling ponies how much I love them.”

such is the English Language.

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:raritydespair: But surely you can tell when it was meant romantically!

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