(they/them) writing about ponies kissing and hugging and making terrible mistakes (pfp by evelili! https://evelili.tumblr.com/post/731980670351622144/free-icons-for-u-nd-ur-partner-in-crime )
A rare night drinking alone at your local lesbian joint is steadily sliding into forgettable when you meet a pony. You've never met a pony before. She strikes up a conversation without hesitation, and you find yourself drawn in by her peppy attitude as you talk about culture, dexterity, cherry stems, and intimacy.
Also, in a stunning maneuver of sharp extra-dimensional ambassadorship, you flirt with her.
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Um. I just finished your Professor Rarity fic and saw you just uploaded a new story. And then... wow. I'm feeling a little flushed from reading this.
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And reading this while at work seems to be a not-good idea. Nonetheless, great work!
Unbelievably based.
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lol, sorry about that... this makes my third strike for me taking the "it's rated T as long as it's just kissing" guideline too literally. it just feels weird to put this in the same rating as outright porn? fimfic needs an AO rating, then this could be M...
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This story isn't porn. It doesn't need the M tag, either.
Writing hot T rated is its own thing, so there!
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Wuhhh, no need to apologize, it's my fault for being all flustered over pony words lol
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Seconded.
Very nice read about breaking down cultural barriers, and getting two people to flirt with one another even through they are of a totally difference species. Oh and making it feel natural as well. Also I really like seeing more PoE stories over the usual HiE stuff that vastly outnumbers it. Pinkies interactions and her characterization felt very good. I do like how you made her feel intelligent while keeping her over top (and often annoying), silliness bearable. Would like to see how this relationship would flourish if you ever considered continuing it. Also I am fine with not having sex scenes.
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What are you even talking about? They didn't even kiss. There was literally no sex.
I'm really really not a fan of human x pony stuff in general, but my interest was piqued when I saw this was lesbian human x pony, and honestly I liked it quite a bit. Your Pinkie is very cute but not as immature as she's sometimes written, which was nice to see, and the relationship being developed felt very genuine and sweet. Now I like one human x pony fic, I guess. (Also I can see you're a Raritwi fan, and therefore someone of taste.)
Embarrassingly, I missed part of the first sentence the first time, but loved the story.
(Simpson's joke)
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yeah inverting the usual HiE is always fun, i tend to view it through a disability lens - one of my fav things about writing mlp is the "how's stuff designed for ponies instead of humans" aspect, and this is just another angle to view that from. yeah i don't go in for the fourth wall breaking stuff for pinkie (i consider that an artifact of the medium, animation, which pinkie is originally presented in rather than an essential part of her character) but she's still gonna be a person you gotta moderate your dosage of if you're low-energy, which ellie is lol.
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yeah i find the swathes of 2nd person ''''anon'''' stories on here generally dull, but it's an undeniable part of the fandom so i wanted to explore human pov in my own way. also it was very funny seeing a comment saying "wow raritwi good taste", going to your following, and seeing Just Mono on there. like, fair lol. but i hope you check out and enjoy my raritwi fics too!
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what's important is that we are all united by our love of women
...uhhh problem?
This is second person aka You are the main character
...but im not female as it seems that the main character is!
...welp i enjoyed it anyways!
(Im kidding this way fun!)
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Yeah!
You could call it T-17!
(Aka teen 17)
I wish that was a real rating because we have pg-13!
Why not that?
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Yeah that was me walking into this going "wait lesbian? Ohhh im not supposed to be here"
What she doesn't realize is if you become Pinkie's special some human, you will get the attention of a LOT of ponies. This includes her family, including Limestone, and Maud. The other elements of harmony. The Cakes. Pumpkin and Pound. Every pony that would be protective of her...
(Not the kind of joke I'm great with, but I'm still going for it.)
And after their NSFW funtimes:
Pinkie: Wooow! So, Ellie? I think I've just figured out what your cutie mark would be for!
aw, cute read ^^ a little bit outside my comfort zone in terms of stuff i normally go for, but getting to read ur writing is more than worth it! loved the examination of human / pony worlds, was way more introspective than i was expecting going in and i am so here for it :D
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well ellie DID say her cutie mark might be in pony ambassadorship, So. . .
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thanks eve! i don't think an artist can ask for anything more than their work pulling someone out of their comfort zone, even if it's something as low-stakes as ponys. i will never tire of lighthearted setups becoming Too Real
This was great! I never read second person fics on this site, but I made an exception here. You did a good job letting us get into Ellie's head, and Pinkie's interactions with her were great. I liked this silly yet insightful portrayal.
I didn't expect Pinkie to have such undiluted, magnificent Rizz, but then again, her charisma stat is maxed out, I should have known.