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As the war between Autobots and Decepticons waged on, it became apparent to Optimus Prime that he and his team had to leave Cyberton in order to survive. However they soon found themselves awakened on a new world after centuries of sleeping. But this was no world with humans having advanced technology. This was a world that was powered by steam and magic.

Takes place after the MLP movie

Art: https://www.deviantart.com/guidoguidi/art/IDW-Transformers-Hearts-of-steel-Optimus-Prime-974853889

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This is gonna be interesting to read. Also a quick question, are you gonna add the other species of Equestria then the ponies? It's 2024 now.

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like i said i haven't fully decided should it be during the show or after the finale. And to be honest i wasn't much of a fan of the "School" seasons. But you'll have to wait and see.

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If it's during the show, then you have a lot more classic plots of the episode and seasons to go with. But with the Transformers being involved.

But if it's after the finale? You have to come up with original stuff with the Autobots and Decepticons.

I like it all save for the part with Luna. With no real background on her origin, save for Starswirl finding her & Celestia as foals, her appearance as a young foal at the end makes it feel forced.

Also, I quite enjoyed your take on Optimus Prime. He has a nice personality of OG Optimus & WFC Optimus.

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edited luna out but I don't recall hearing anything about luna and celestia's origin unless it was a comic thing

Nice choice of setting this after events of the Movie. Since you clearly said you have a distaste of the "school of friendship" from season 8 and 9.

And the "robots in disguise" order by Optimus makes little to no sense in this setting?

Considering that Equestria is quite literally a magical medieval fantasy, have little vehicle technology besides antique trains, boats/ships, and blimps.

Makes more sense and way easier for the Cybertronians to fit right in our world where technology is vast with tons of many different vehicles way back in 1885 of the very first automobile to modern day of 2024.


And Tempest Shadow is going to make another big mistake of her life.

“Y-yes,” Tempest stammered. “I’ve been trying to redeem myself in the eyes of ponies and many species whom I wronged. But it seems no one wants to give me a chance. Lockdown here says I might have a chance by helping you.”

Ironic that this very poor decision she has made, will most definitely make everybody else to have very good validation to NEVER trust her after this. :facehoof: :ajbemused:

“Lord Megatron, I hope we can work well together to build a better future,” Tempest said as Lockdown began to leave and start swimming upward to the surface.

Megatron watched them leave and grinned maliciously. “Yes, my better future.”

She's going to feel like a total idiot when the Decepticons reveal their true motives.

And I have a very bad feeling that this will further mess up her "redemption plans", and make everypony/everybody else distrust her further, even worse than Discord with what happened with Tirek and from Season 9 in canon.

You get what I'm saying?

Meanwhile behind some trees two robots watched. Prowl just facepalmed in annoyance while wheeljack rolled his optics. “So much for robots in disguise, why is it always Bee?” Wheeljack complained.

“Either way we have to inform Optimus, let's hope Bumblebee doesn’t expose himself to more of these little ponies,” Prowl said.

Classic Bumblebee. At least he still has his voice.

Twilight sat in her room reading a book when Spike came in. “Hey Twilight, you got a letter from Applejack.”

Twilight rolled her eyes, “Please tell me its not another rant about that machine.”

“No it’s something about a new friend she made out there,” Spike said as he handed her the letter.

Twilight read through the scroll. She then turned to her assistant. “Spike, get some sleep, we'll be going on another trip to see AJ tomorrow.”

Welp, guess it's too late to stay hidden, Prowl.

I'm liking the story.

I hope you show both the Autobots and Decepticons' side of how they feel about the war. Or show that not all Decepticons are heartless monsters and that not all Autobots are "good guys."

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You'd be surprised by who I have planned for that Decepticon statement.

So Shockwave is thinking of introducing himself to Zecora? I do hope that she can see through his manipulation before it's too late.

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Don’t forget Shockwave doesn’t know if his fellow cons are online or even the Autobots. If anything the question really is what does he really have planned for his own research and how will he approach this.

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You've got a very good point there about his plans for his experiment.

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huh, I guess Shockwave did something good for once in his life he might be planning something still but then Shockwave and his tech could make crippled creatures fly or even walk again and replace a limb.....



......or even an certain ex villains horn......

still shockwave with an actual equestrian docterate does sound appealing ......and potentially fufulling

I think I'm getting an idea of ​​what you're planning for the Decepticon statement.

Good chapter btw

I have never, ever thought to see a day where Shockwave of all Decepticons actually be reformed!!??

It seems that Shockwave's Shadowplay and Empurata are starting to wear off due to his centuries of viewing the ponies.




interesting...

Even the Constructicons become trains, but it's no surprise to see Astrotrain being here.

Anyways, I did warned you Tempest that you're going to regret it.

And R.I.P. Grubber.

P.S. Hope this "super soldier" project doesn't become a disaster.

Well, Grubber died.

Tempest made a big mistake, I see that and I just noticed that this Megatron is a classic one, like the one from G1.

By the way, will other characters like the Terrorcons or the Mercenaries appear later?

Will you adapt arcs from some comics like D-Void? It would be epic to see Celestia fight that entity.

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I do have plans for other transformers to appear. Let’s just say Shockwave’s project is a nod to one of the games and a fan favorite.

Grimlock? Hmm, nice reference. And instead of Wheeljack/Ratchet, it's Shockwave making him.


And you gotta be kidding me with Chrysalis!? :ajbemused:

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In fall of Cybertron it is rumored Shockwave made the dinobots by experimenting on a troop. Shockwave's role in this universe was also inspired by his TFP counterpart making Predaking.

Don't worry about Chrysalis she won't be seen much in this story but she will play a vital role in the sequel series of one shots ill do.

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But isn't Grimlock and his team of "Lightning Strike Coalition Force" already Autobots/regular cybertronians with regular vehicle transformations until they were captured by Shockwave and the Insecticons.

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Yes but this is a whole new universe with significant differences.

Oh, oh, Crissy is pulling an 'Aliens 2' with an (another) exoskeleton ...

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you could say that. This was based on a Transformers Prime episode (Human Factor) and William Afton becoming Springtrap.

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That works, but are you planning to down all the way down to the vampiric rabbit hole ??

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I don’t know what that means but for the sake of spoilers you’ll have to wait and see

Takes place after the movie

Which one?

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MLP the movie. Right after the Storm King defeat

Una

That cover art is amazing!

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Well the art came from DeviantArt and it was one of the few pics of "Hearts of Steel" (or steam train) Optimus Prime.

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So what you’re saying is that it’s not an official piece of media?

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no but it is a pretty close interpretation of Optimus Prime in the hearts of steel universe but mostly its small sequel comic.

Yay, a unique opportunity to get their original vehicle forms.

Fluttershy went from confused to annoyed as she facehoofed. “How many times must I tell everypony, he’s not mean he’s just grouchy.”

Fluttershy, that statement is more debatable than Shochwave understanding even the concept of ethics. :facehoof:

Discord is gonna be pissed he missed all of this.

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funny you mentioned him because youll see him in the first chapter of my sequel

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