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Flurry Heart, her father, and a horde of Visigoths sack Rome. Along the way, Flurry Heart learns valuable life skills that probably will lead to a political incident.

Era: Far after Season 9.


Look what you just made me do, Muggony. I was not going to enter this contest, but your Gothic bonus point suggested this story. :twilightangry2: (Ref: Gothic sack of Rome in 410).


  • Narcotics tag is for imbibing alcohol.
  • Death tag is for described deaths of a chicken and a human.
  • Violence tag is for described assaults on a chicken and several humans.
  • Crude comment about the Pantheon.

Image icon of the structure is by Delapouite and rights to the image icon are at the link to the image source (by clicking on the image). I added the text, the lines, flames, and the pony in the image.... Romans invented Latin. The font's rights are at this clickable link.

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Comment posted by Comment Club deleted March 6th

dangit i had the same idea of how to do Goth Flurry Heart!

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Goths sacked Rome more than once, so too could the contest support multiple sacks by Flurry Heart! :pinkiecrazy:

For example, there's also the Ostrogothic sack of Rome in 546! :rainbowderp:

double dangit. I also wanted the first to do a "goth" goth Flurry. Mine goes in a somewhat different direction, at least.

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As a follower of your stories, I am sure that whatever you write will be entertaining and popular. :derpytongue2: Looking forward to seeing it. :twilightsmile: Certainly there is room for Visigothic, Ostrogothic, High Gothic, 40K Imperial Gothic Flurry Hearts and more. :pinkiecrazy:

Delightful. I knew there’d be at least one historically accurate Goth Flurry Heart, and this was a great execution of the concept, especially the parallels in a tradition of oppression (from a teenage perspective, anyway.) Thank you for it and best of luck in the judging.

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