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Princess Cadance provides her daughter Flurry Heart another wonderful day again...and again...and again--oh no.


*WARNING: Alcohol Use by Adults*


Entry in the Cadance is a Terrible Mom 2021 Competition (Entries).


Cover Image From: https://mlp.fandom.com/wiki/Flurry_Heart?file=Flurry_Heart_ID_S6E1.png

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Comments ( 9 )

Thanks for the entry!

With the footnotes being links, I would just turn appropriate words or phrases into those links.

The liquor aftertaste was powerful--not so bad--probably antiseptic and the... unique taste of floor-cleansing chemicals should keep her perky.

I wonder if her alicorn constitution will help her shrug off the effects?

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With the footnotes being links, I would just turn appropriate words or phrases into those links.

Thank you! Did not realize that. Should I assume, then, that is the standard here? I have now added the links since it makes sense in this situation! I was originally expecting there to be a way to link the in-line footnotes down to the authors' notes footnote explanations, which might be the best solution for future footnotes that are more of the explanatory rather than link type, but I did not find a way.

I wonder if her alicorn constitution will help her shrug off the effects?

It certainly will not hurt! It has to be good for something. Obviously, humans and normal little ponies should not attempt!

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Thank you for reading. Groundhog Day, mentioned in the author's notes on Chapter 2, is a comedy movie from 1993 starring Bill Murray. It involves a time loop that takes place on Groundhog Day, a tradition in the United States. The movie has a 96% rating from critics on Rotten Tomatoes, which is rather impressive.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Groundhog_Day_(film)
https://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/groundhog_day

Until mommy gets tired and ask kindly to Discord to stop her from doing time-loops... Or the alicorn of time appear suddenly and tell Flurry that she was a bad filly

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