Equestria and the Crystal Empire have been at war as of late. The Element Bearers? Nothing more than captives of King Sombra.
Candy plans to do nothing more than survive and help the wounded. Little does she know, things will go much differently than she planned...
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Nicely done still. No offense but got confused here
why hands if theyre ponies?
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I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
I forgot to put the anthro tag... I knew I forgot something!
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This is an Anthro work?
Also, you think a verbal response by candy when surrending would look good?
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What sort of response?
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like that she complies. you know, like "Al-right...dont shoot" know what i mean
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I guess it would. Perhaps I'll add it in the next chapter when she reaches the Empire?
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your call
11808201
also, you could describe Candy's appearance and that of lemon, so readers got a better picture of her, so to speak
Huh.
Yeah, okay, sure.
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Ok.
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So...does that mean you liked it, or...?
Iookin forward to seeing where this goes!
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I'm glad to hear that you're interested in this story!