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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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Two surviving siblings escaped from a volcanic eruption and they try to go a safe place, except it's the complete opposite in Equestria. Years later from abuse & neglect toward a false allegation crime, the big sister is captured any bought her little brother some time to escape. The little brother cried in sadness of losing his last family member and wanted to end his life in order to find peace, until a calm voice stops him. It was the tree of harmony that he encounters and after some talk time, the tree has given him the elements before teleporting him to the mirror world. From there, he meets his adoptive loving family, but it's going to be very hard for him to adjust around almost every girl, including those that look identical to his abusers.

RGRE Girls.

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Comments ( 34 )

Based on the picture that you used for this fic, Does that mean that the Dazzlings are redeemed in this timeline and Trixie is a lot nicer together with Starlight, Gloriosa Daisy, Wallflower Blush and Sci Twi's classmates from Crystal Prep?

I HOPE that when the Good Equestria Girls learn the horrible truth on what has happened to the poor boy and his big sister in that horrific, OOC, Evil Equestria World. That I will like to have our favourite Human Characters BEAT UP, and PUNISH their Evil, and Abusing Pony Counterparts to the GROUND!!!!!!!! :flutterrage: :twilightangry2: 😡

And hopefully save the little boy's big sister in the process?

"Yes sir, about five days ago, I got an urgent call near Canterlot High School about an assault in school grounds. I sent in both officers Gleaming Shield and her partner Rondo Hilt to investigate. In there reports from arriving at CHS, they saw a civilian who's all bruised up, screaming, and has a knife swinging it around. Thankfully, officer Rondo knocked him out cold and took him in their cop car. They written down reports to any witness, Vice-Principal Luna gave her report on what happen and why her sister's hand is injured."

Something tells me he’s going to wake up real angry.

"Make sure the 'service' is elsewhere outside this station cause I can hear loud 'initiation' near my office."

Hearing him say it, she realizes of what he meant and her whole face is red of embarrassment.

Wow. Just wow.

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I don’t know if that would be possible.

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Why not?! The Real Bad Guys are the TRUE Threat! And it's better to have all heroic sides befriend each other, and then work together.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted May 1st, 2021

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Because, if it’s true that it’s an alternate version of the rainbooms, then that means they possibly not only have the same skills, but also the same superpowers, and I don’t think the rainbooms have experience dealing with humans with superpowers.

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But don't you want the OOC Evil Pony assholes get their consequences by the Good Human Equestria Girls Versions to protect the poor boy and his sister?

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Technically, they’re not ooc if they’re from a different world. Also, don’t get me wrong I definitely do, but it’s not gonna be as simple as you make it sound.

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Right! Alternate Universe with Evil Counterparts and all of that shit! I just really hate the Ponies acting like OOC Racist/Xenophobic Assholes. NO matter if it's a dark alternate timeline/universe, etc..

And while it will not be simple. I doubt that the Good Equestria Girl Human Versions aren't gonna let this go. Especially that the Boy definitely wants his justified revenge, and maybe rescue his own big sister.

Maybe near the end, that it finally happens. But, that's the author's decision on when.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted May 1st, 2021
Comment posted by Pete100 deleted May 1st, 2021

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It actually depends on a lot of things.

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Like what are they exactly, based on your option?

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One of them being if he wants their help. Because, if someone treated me the same way they treated him, then I wouldn’t want their help. Another one being if they would want to help at all. And, there are a lot more.

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True! But, considering that these are the Good Versions, and are also Human. And why can't they help anyway?! That's stupid!

Plus, it's also sounds stubborn for the boy to not receive help for getting justified revenge against the evil abusers. I know I would!

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Sorry, I think I may have gotten this story confused with the other one, but some of my points still stand.

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Oh! You mean the Godzilla/Pokemon Crossover that was also released with this story?

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Yeah, but a few of the things I pointed out could be the same for this story, too.

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Yep, hope that the poor Boy can tell the difference between these Human Good Versions of the MLP Characters. And then, maybe they can help him save his big sister. And FINALLY get Justified Revenge against the OOC, Racist/Xenophobic, and Evil Pony Abusers.

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Maybe after awhile of being with them, but we also don’t know if it’s The Rainbooms.

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Seriously?! The Rainbooms are literally in the Character Tags. AND is in the Picture. So, I doubt that you think that the Rainbooms won't be in involved by helping the poor boy?

Or the Author himself could literally just ask us on what's happening in his Stories.

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I don’t like making assumptions. We only have the a description and one chapter to go off of.

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Very well then.

Just hope that the Author himself has the time to update his stories more frequently.

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I’m surprised he’s still making new stories.

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Same. Probably thinking about new ideas for his stories. Kinds like me in my own head. But, sadly didn't make any stories yet.

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Don’t worry. You might someday.

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You’re welcome

What is Crossover with ?

cant wait to see more chapters soon:twilightsmile:

I hope this story is updated. I'm very intrigued on the concept of a human boy traumatized in Equestria and shown love by the counterparts of those who did God knows what to him.

hay when will you update this story:heart::pinkiecrazy:

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