• Published 30th Apr 2021
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Fragments Of Lost Innocence & Peace. - Neutral Boy



After suffering abuse and losing his family, a human boy gets a surprise gift from the Tree of Harmony and sent to the mirror world for a chance in care of a new family and maybe love along the way. (RGRE Girls)

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Prologue: Gift & caretakers.

In the Canterlot police station, the chief of police Garnet Vince is filing up on the police result papers.

He paused when someone is knocking on his door.

"Come in!"

The door opens up to reveal another police officer walk in and closes the door, then salutes him.

"Police Lieutenant Elisa Briggs reporting chief!"

"At ease Elisa, no need to salute me for today. Please, have a seat."

She nods and goes to sit in the chair.

"Anything to report while I was gone for the past week Lieutenant Elisa?"

She handed him a document report.

"Yes sir, about five days ago, I got an urgent call near Canterlot High School about an assault in school grounds. I sent in both officers Gleaming Shield and her partner Rondo Hilt to investigate. In there reports from arriving at CHS, they saw a civilian who's all bruised up, screaming, and has a knife swinging it around. Thankfully, officer Rondo knocked him out cold and took him in their cop car. They written down reports to any witness, Vice-Principal Luna gave her report on what happen and why her sister's hand is injured."

"Apparently, after Luna and her sister Principal Celestia got done with work, they found an injured civilian boy near the statue. While Celestia tries to check on him, they didn't expect to see the boy screaming at them and pulls out a knife, stabbing her sister's right hand. Luna pulled her sister away from him as he said horrible words & curses at them right before the police showed up."

"In the end, he's locked up in a cell for some time before taking him to the hospital for the treatment. Doctor Umar told us that the boy had a mental breakdown, but we don't know the cause of it yet. We also know he doesn't have his wallet on him, nor any address to his family's house. Currently now, he's at the hospital being taken care of by nurse Redheart and her two assistances."

Police Chief Garnet rubs him chin and scratches it.

"I see, then what about the Principal sisters? Were they going to file a charge on him?"

"Afraid not, Luna is patching up Celestia's hand. Though they do hope that the boy's okay when he's recovering from his mental mind and maybe apologize for attacking Celestia."

"Hmmmm, how about the boy?"

"He's stable in recovery, but he hasn't talked much, except a bit more by the two assistants and a visitor. If later on his parents won't come or contact Canterlot, then he'll either end up in the orphanage center or on the streets. I don't know what has happen in his past life, but I'm sure it isn't fair for him in either of those two options. In my opinion, I think an adopted family would help him. You know of anyone else in mind chief?"

Garnet hummed in thought for a moment before answering her.

"Well, I know of one not far from Canterlot. I'll see if I can give her a call later. Anything else?"

"No other reports sir. Though um, when you off for a week, did you find any suitable ladies yet?"

Garnet looked at her unamused and sighs.

"Not really Elisa, I'm on a different schedule for a month. Also a word of advise?"

"Y-Yes?"

He stands up and leans in, glaring at Elisa as she seems a bit nervous.

"Make sure the 'service' is elsewhere outside this station cause I can hear loud 'initiation' near my office."

Hearing him say it, she realizes of what he meant and her whole face is red of embarrassment.

"G-G-Got it C-Chief Garnet!"

She quickly salutes to him before opening the door and slams it shut running off, leaving Garnet chuckling to himself.

"Heheheh, I'm glad that I hired them, but still surprised those two lovebirds got really hooked in a relationship."

He sits back down and picks up the phone.

"Hey, this is Police Chief Garnet. Can you put the Sheriff on the line? I need to speak with her."


At the Canterlot hospital, a girl visitor in a summer dress clothing is watching over a restrained patient boy.

Her name is Ichigo, she has soft green eyes and a petite build. She wears her straight & medium blue hair in a razor-cut hairstyle, where her hair hangs lengthier on the right side of her face. She has free-falling bangs that mostly covers her right eye and one long strand of hair on the left side of her face. She also wears a white hair clip holding back the bangs on her left side.

"Never thought that I spend my long vacation here in Canterlot." Ichigo murmurs.

"Especially since moving away from my old school far away."

Her eyes glances to the boy whispering words in his sleep.

"I wonder if things were worse at your school as well, huh?"

Her voice gets interrupted when a door near her is open up, revealing the assistants of Nurse Redheart.

There names are Anthea and Concordia. Concordia has golden eyes, yellow hair with a blue band tied in a ponytail with two locks standing out and wears a blue blouse, a white-yellow skirt with a ribbon and a pair of blue ballet shoes. Anthea has pinkish eyes, long pink hair with two locks being over her chest and wears a green cloak over her white shirt, a white-pink skirt with a ribbon and a pair of pink ballet shoes.

"Oh hey Anthea and Concordia, it's been a while." Ichigo happily greeted the sisters.

"Indeed it is, everything okay at your home?" Anthea asked her.

"Not much, dad is staying at home doing house chores while mom's working at a business place."

"Speaking of homes, have you found a home or apartment yet?" Concordia wondered, tilting her head.

"Eh it's a work in progress, I barely found any suitable place of home or apartment to rent while I'm stuck here in Canterlot. Then again, the food is really delicious in some stores so I'm not complaining."

"Oh, well did try to attend a school here? I heard it's a nice place to make friends and secret boy hot boy~!"

The two sisters giggle and Ichigo blush a bit red, then shakes her head no.

"Ewwww Concordia, you know I'm not ready for that yet!"

While the three girls were busy chatting, neither of them notice a bag by the patient's bed sparkling in a small bright light before it stopped.

Author's Note:

It's-a-mah-birthday-today!

Okay, so maybe there might've been some RGRE Girls stories I didn't know were on here. Besides that whole thing, I came across a story on another site that looked interesting. So I thought hell, how about I make mine, but with a twist in RGRE world? So yeah, I got this story made.

Anyways, leave a comment down on what do you think and I'll see ya later!

Comments ( 34 )

Based on the picture that you used for this fic, Does that mean that the Dazzlings are redeemed in this timeline and Trixie is a lot nicer together with Starlight, Gloriosa Daisy, Wallflower Blush and Sci Twi's classmates from Crystal Prep?

I HOPE that when the Good Equestria Girls learn the horrible truth on what has happened to the poor boy and his big sister in that horrific, OOC, Evil Equestria World. That I will like to have our favourite Human Characters BEAT UP, and PUNISH their Evil, and Abusing Pony Counterparts to the GROUND!!!!!!!! :flutterrage: :twilightangry2: 😡

And hopefully save the little boy's big sister in the process?

"Yes sir, about five days ago, I got an urgent call near Canterlot High School about an assault in school grounds. I sent in both officers Gleaming Shield and her partner Rondo Hilt to investigate. In there reports from arriving at CHS, they saw a civilian who's all bruised up, screaming, and has a knife swinging it around. Thankfully, officer Rondo knocked him out cold and took him in their cop car. They written down reports to any witness, Vice-Principal Luna gave her report on what happen and why her sister's hand is injured."

Something tells me he’s going to wake up real angry.

"Make sure the 'service' is elsewhere outside this station cause I can hear loud 'initiation' near my office."

Hearing him say it, she realizes of what he meant and her whole face is red of embarrassment.

Wow. Just wow.

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I don’t know if that would be possible.

10795747

Why not?! The Real Bad Guys are the TRUE Threat! And it's better to have all heroic sides befriend each other, and then work together.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted May 1st, 2021

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Because, if it’s true that it’s an alternate version of the rainbooms, then that means they possibly not only have the same skills, but also the same superpowers, and I don’t think the rainbooms have experience dealing with humans with superpowers.

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But don't you want the OOC Evil Pony assholes get their consequences by the Good Human Equestria Girls Versions to protect the poor boy and his sister?

10796130
Technically, they’re not ooc if they’re from a different world. Also, don’t get me wrong I definitely do, but it’s not gonna be as simple as you make it sound.

10796287

Right! Alternate Universe with Evil Counterparts and all of that shit! I just really hate the Ponies acting like OOC Racist/Xenophobic Assholes. NO matter if it's a dark alternate timeline/universe, etc..

And while it will not be simple. I doubt that the Good Equestria Girl Human Versions aren't gonna let this go. Especially that the Boy definitely wants his justified revenge, and maybe rescue his own big sister.

Maybe near the end, that it finally happens. But, that's the author's decision on when.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted May 1st, 2021
Comment posted by Pete100 deleted May 1st, 2021

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It actually depends on a lot of things.

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Like what are they exactly, based on your option?

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One of them being if he wants their help. Because, if someone treated me the same way they treated him, then I wouldn’t want their help. Another one being if they would want to help at all. And, there are a lot more.

10797546

True! But, considering that these are the Good Versions, and are also Human. And why can't they help anyway?! That's stupid!

Plus, it's also sounds stubborn for the boy to not receive help for getting justified revenge against the evil abusers. I know I would!

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Sorry, I think I may have gotten this story confused with the other one, but some of my points still stand.

10797600

Oh! You mean the Godzilla/Pokemon Crossover that was also released with this story?

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Yeah, but a few of the things I pointed out could be the same for this story, too.

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Yep, hope that the poor Boy can tell the difference between these Human Good Versions of the MLP Characters. And then, maybe they can help him save his big sister. And FINALLY get Justified Revenge against the OOC, Racist/Xenophobic, and Evil Pony Abusers.

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Maybe after awhile of being with them, but we also don’t know if it’s The Rainbooms.

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Seriously?! The Rainbooms are literally in the Character Tags. AND is in the Picture. So, I doubt that you think that the Rainbooms won't be in involved by helping the poor boy?

Or the Author himself could literally just ask us on what's happening in his Stories.

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I don’t like making assumptions. We only have the a description and one chapter to go off of.

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Very well then.

Just hope that the Author himself has the time to update his stories more frequently.

10798485
I’m surprised he’s still making new stories.

10798519

Same. Probably thinking about new ideas for his stories. Kinds like me in my own head. But, sadly didn't make any stories yet.

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Don’t worry. You might someday.

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You’re welcome

What is Crossover with ?

cant wait to see more chapters soon:twilightsmile:

I hope this story is updated. I'm very intrigued on the concept of a human boy traumatized in Equestria and shown love by the counterparts of those who did God knows what to him.

hay when will you update this story:heart::pinkiecrazy:

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