Pinkie Pie has always loved her sweets, but when things start to get out of control, Twilight Sparkle challenges her to change her ways. Will Pinkie Pie manage to turn things around, or will she need additional help? Can she possibly learn what it means to be healthy?
This story is now a follow up to my other story called "Flutter Clutter." You do not have to read that story to understand what happens here in this story.
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well i liked it, but you really need to change that wall of text
I looooooooveeeeeeeeee it.
Please continue with stories like this
I looooooooveeeeeeeeee it.
Please continue with stories like this
1507256 Thanks so much! Check out my other stories too! :)
This has to be one of the craziest and funniest stories you've ever written, dude! I mean, Pinkie must've gone crazy after having no sweets for months!
Could use a little rewrite, but otherwise, well done!
3089493 Thanks! Poor Pinkie had to do something hard! I do have a MUCH crazier Pinkie Pie story that makes this story look really tame....It's called "Pinkie Pie Gets Amplified!"
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Wow!
And when Pinkie went to the dentist, I figured (s)he might've acted a lot like this guy:
3089552 Haha! That was great! Although I'm sure they would need some kind of super strong sedatives to keep her flank sitting still in the chair and to make her stop talking so much. Actually, they would probably just need to knock her out cold. That would take care of that problem!
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Yeah, but this song probably would've made it a little more musical.
One does not simply... deprive Pinkie of cupcakes...
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Or she will haunt you... FOREVER
Okay! done here, thumbs up-ed and going to continue with the... um, Rarity story! Yeah, hopefully I'll finish reading that sooner rather than later...
3167175 Haha! That picture is great! Thanks for reading! I have many other older stories too if you didn't notice, and one of them is another story about Applejack. I know that she is your most favorite! I hope you may enjoy the next story in this little series. :)
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And I've only had time to post a few things on the Christian threads here or on Christian Bronies Facebook... I think I'm gonna have to...
Oh, is it the Apple of My Eye? Grrr.... I'll have to get to that once I'm done with the newer ones... past few days has been really busy for me at work. I couldn't even finish my next chapter for this week!
3169812 Sure! Take a break. I know I have been writing so much lately, and yes, that story is called, "The Apple of my Eye."
Mistake: Novacain doesn't keep it's effect for more than a day, in the country I live it's effect only lasts about 3 hours.
Wouldn't Pinkie eventually just try to run away from Sugar Cube corner?
3507712 She had just gotten back from the Dentist when Twilight came to visit her, so the effects of the Novacain would still be strong.
Sure, she could have tried to run away, but I didn't plan for it in this fic. She does try to run away in part 5 of this series.
I'd like to see you try, Pinkie. The thing is, you've already shown Part 1 of gluttony, cavities.