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"Why Do We Fall? So We Can Learn to Pick Ourselves Back Up," -Alfred Pennyworth

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Celestia, princess of the sun, and mare of the morning is in dire trouble. Her long running prank war with Luna had resumed ever since she had returned from the moon, and since then, she's been on a loosing streak! And of course Luna is always there to rub it in her face every step of the way. But while she was looking through some of Twilight's old letters on friendship lessons she's learned, Celestia has a sudden surge of inspiration on how to prank Luna back. And she'll need Zecora's help to do it.
And if her plan goes well, it means Luna will get knocked down a few pegs, or several in this case. And then, she'll have to contend with her extremely big sister!

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Art by Tsitra360

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Why isn’t there a Twilight Sparkle tag when she’s already in the cover art?

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Because she only had one speaking line to match the picture, unlike Shining and Cadence. Other than that she really wasn't in the story much so I didn't really see any reason to add the tag

I can deny it no longer!:twilightangry2:

I am smol.:trollestia:

Funny! 😂 Sibling revenge Celestia is a fun Celestia 😂

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Oh yeah lol. She definitely enjoyed giving Luna her comeuppance :D

Interesting decision to convey the idea of rather cliché pranks as revolutionary to Celestia's eyes when compared to the typical methods she employs.

Some of the pranks that have been utilised by Luna here seem a bit much, but are quite understandable to provide both context and motive.

When you mentioned that Luna shrank to the size of a pea, my mind identified a pea as being about the same size as a tooth, but later descriptions seem to talk about her being closer to the size of a broad bean outside of the ultra-miniature scene at the spa.

As soon as I read the promise Luna insisted on, I knew one of them would make themselves gigantic for the follow-up of the primary antics.

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Truth be told, I actually figured that it would finish with Luna doing that, but it works just as well.

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