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"Why Do We Fall? So We Can Learn to Pick Ourselves Back Up," -Alfred Pennyworth

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This story is a sequel to BIG Business


After the troubles with the titanic nobles had been resolved everypony thought that was the end of any size related shenanigans. But little did any they know; it was only the beginning. With the book still discarded in the woods sparking with a little of Blueblood’s magical residue left on it, the incomplete spell is cast automatically one last time and heads towards the closest town: Ponyville. And who is the poor pony who gets hit? Big Macintosh. With the incomplete growth spell now introducing different side effects, Big Macintosh will now solely become the biggest thing in the kingdom. Wanting to do something remarkable for once in his life after being left forgotten about on the farm while his big time hero sister Applejack defends Equestria, it looks this will be the perfect opportunity. Looks like Big Macintosh is going to enjoy living large.


Contains Macro/Micro


This is the second story in the Titanverse trilogy


Cover art by Tsitra360

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 87 )

starting off the year big! ^^ good start as always

Excellent use of the build-up with Big Mac's issues. I'd anticipated something along these lines not long after watching Brotherhooves Social.

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Thanks, as we'll see in the following chapters as the spell starts to take effect, these problems will come to surface. So how will Big Mac use the titan spell to his advantage to alleviate this? Guess we'll have to find out :D

Well i'm liking this so far and i did feel bad for big mac because his sisters and granny did something that change history or great while all he did is helping out with the farm so i'm very excited when the growth spell makes big mac even bigger and see his fmily reaction and i hope does something great!

The question is does the spell get triggered every time Big Mac tries to intuitively utilise his normal earth-pony skills or does it fire off at timed intervals?

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The spell will get triggered every time Big Mac uses his earth pony magic

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Of course, as an earth pony, there's a strong possibility that he uses his own magic without realising it in contrast to unicorn magic.

Hi to anyone who see's this, the next chapter is coming along very slowly due to the fact that I'm getting ready for my next round of classes for the semester. So I'll try my best to have the third chapter out in a timely manner

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That's okay you can take your semester and time i'm waiting patiently.

Finally you have made chapter three that felt like forever!

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Yeah I finally had some time to finish it and get it out. So what do you think so far? And what do you think will happen next?

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I think it's going great so and the more magic big mac uses the bigger he will get and I'm pretty sure he will use his magic to help equestria his way.

I don't think this'd be much of a story if Big Mac acts like a teacher's pet. At some point he's bound to take action of a sorts.

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True, true. But the question isn't if he'll disobey, only when he'll disobey. Because let's not forget how Big Mac was feeling at the start of the first two chapters. How long before he reaches a breaking point and sets off to do things on his own? And better yet, just what will he do when he sets off?

Comment posted by Moore98luke deleted Jan 28th, 2022

Quick update for everyone, the next chapter is almost done. Though it will be a bit on the shorter side because I'm using it to Segway into the next act. I'll try to have it up as soon as possible

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Okay I’m happy to know that you are going to make a segment for this story and I was worried that you didn’t want to make another chapter at all.
Anyway I can’t wait for the next act aka chapter for this story.

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Yeah don't worry I have every intention of finishing this trilogy

I love how I said this chapter was going to be on the shorter side but it still ended up being over 3K words

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It certainly wasn't the shortest chapter to date.

Small update: I'm taking a short break from writing for a little while. Just so I can get some things back in order IRL, the next 2 weeks are going to be a little taxing on me

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Basically I have 3 exams coming up in the next 2 weeks so I have to take a short break to study

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Oh okay good luck studying and hope you pass! ;)

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If that's not a reason to put these stories on ice I don't know what is.

UPDATE: Now that the exhausting wave of exams are over I can finally start the next chapter

With such an ability, he probably can revive an ancient city of ruins and bring it back to its glory. With just a single step to fill up its perimeters.

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It's funny you should say this because I actually have something like this planned for the final chapter ;D

With the conclusion of Chapter 5 I feel like I should mention that Chapter 6 will feature the return of two characters from the previous story. Who do you think it will be? Also, what did everyone think of chapter 5?

UPDATE: Mega Macintosh will be put on hold until midterms are done

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Okay that’s fine I’ll be wait real patient!
And good luck with the midterms.

Writing for the next chapter has officially resumed with the first quarter done! With the last chapter focusing on the hijinks of Big Mac being a giant in a city, for the next chapter I want to lean into the more heartwarming and caring side of Big Mac's personality and how he implements that now as a Titan

Wasn't the name of the town Oakenwood rather than Oakenville?

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Ah dang, you're right, I'll go change it. Thanks for the heads up! But other than that, what did you think of the chapter?

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Pretty awesome; the retrospection allowed a fine juxtaposition of the current situation with the previous story.

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One more question, what do you think is going to happen to Big Mac at the end of the story?

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After reading the latest chapter I've got a suspicion that he'll be reticent should the Princesses succeed in their latest idea for bypassing the enchantment, entering that classic habituation state of "just one more..." while retaining the sentiment of making a positive contribution with his current condition.

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Interesting. Well, we'll just have to see next chapter!

Never got into the first installment, so she was new to me. But I enjoyed this character development.

I really like Sturdy Step. I sure hope she get big again. :twilightsmile:

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Glad to hear! Making Sturdy big again is a possibility but I'm not sure if it will fit in the context of the third story, but you never know!

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Maybe she could be superhero like ultraman, since she's a boxing champion she would make a great superhero.:rainbowdetermined2:

They don't called him Big Mac for nothing.

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