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"Why Do We Fall? So We Can Learn to Pick Ourselves Back Up," -Alfred Pennyworth

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After constantly having their reasonable (to them) requests ignored by the princesses, a group of nobles decide to take matters into their own hooves so they can get the benefits they want. How are they going to accomplish this? By casting a growth spell on all of them and making themselves the biggest things in the kingdom. There’s no way the princesses will ignore them now, right? Join this group of supersized nobles as they stroll around a now tiny Equestria, exploring the wonders of their newfound size and the perks of being bigger than mountains.


Contains Macro/Micro


This is the first story in the Titanverse trilogy

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 50 )

With no disrespect meant to the author. This premise may challenge my love of Macro.


Eh I’m going to read it anyways.

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what do you mean? Is there any area you think I should improve?

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Just joking about who was being made into giants.

Sorry if it was taken the wrong way.

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Oh no problem at all! This story in of itself isn't really meant to be taken seriously, just some harmless fun. It's also the first part in a trilogy I'm planning. I wanted to change things up from the normal ponies usually seen as giants but who knows, maybe you'll enjoy who becomes big in the next story or the third. Hope you enjoy and if you want maybe you could check out my other story The Royal Sisters GIANT break

I hope someone will be able to convert your descriptions of Sturdy, Enterprise and Lily Shine into some form of visual art. If there's anyone out there who can produce a visual scene from each of your stories, that'd be even better.

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Glad to have caught your interest! The second chapter is about halfway done currently

If the value of 1,000,000' is absolutely correct rather than an approximation, then my conclusion is that they've been enlarged 200,000x, meaning that their average height overall would be about 200mi.

I had expected Blueblood to consider some other demands he might make before getting to the stipend.

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Nah, Blueblood is petty like that. My man only wants the bits just so he can blow it all off on stuff he wants to buy. As you may recall from the first chapter, even though the ponies that turned into giants are nobles, some of them may not be the brightest when it comes to making their demands

When Blueblood gets shrunk back down to normal he's going to get thrown into the dungeon for making Luna listen to all of his demands.

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I wonder if you've got some variations in mind like what you were saying with your other published work.

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Alternative endings, except there's no definitive ending.

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Gotcha, well I do have a plan for the ending because this is the first of three stories in this trilogy so I hope you'll like it when it rolls around!

Comment posted by BottleH2O deleted Aug 18th, 2021

Sounds like you've got a plan for the story. I can't wait to see how it plays out.

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Minor confession, I've had this planned for a bit actually. I said in the description that this story was the first in a trilogy I had planned so I guess this kinda goes to show just how long I spent thinking this up. Also by the way, I understand that some people aren't really happy that nobles from Canterlot were the ones that grew, I understand that I just wanted to put a spotlight on others that don't usually get center stage. Hopefully people will enjoy who grows into a giant next story ;D

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I actually like that other ponies outside the Mane Six are getting the spotlight to be giants and really they haven't hurt anypony. yet.

UPDATE: Chapter 5 is coming along pretty slowly, due to the fact of my job and classes will be starting up soon. I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible

Well, that's certainly one way to deal with a pony that's gone off the deep end mentally. Anyway another good chapter here, can't wait for the next one and I hope that all is well with you.

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Thanks man, really appreciate it. As of now where it stands, the two groups are going back to Blueblood and to confront the Princesses. As for Sturdy Step, well, let's just say I have something special planned for her ;)

By the way, I've been meaning to ask, what do you think of the new characters I've introduced so far?

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All of the new characters that you've introduced into the story have fit in nicely and I have genuinely enjoyed reading about them.

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I'm glad to hear that! I was so worried that they wouldn't fit in well or something of that nature. Do you think that they're too overbearing or too cruel? Because I'm trying to characterize them as well intentioned but a bit spoiled and snooty. Did you think I was able to pull that off with
Enterprise and Lily?

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Personally I find that their behaviour's less stuck-up than the canon 3, but that might depend on who they're interacting with.

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I think you've nailed down their characters exactly like you wanted to as well Intentioned because they haven't done anything evil not even Blueblood and actually in the case of the Lilly, Enterprise, and Stock scene from this most recent chapter they helped the less fortunate ponies that they usually look down upon all while still maintaining that snooty behavior that most Canterlot ponies show.

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You are right, it does depend on who they're interacting with. Take for example the town Lily and Enterprise interacted with, everything worked out well and everyone was happy. Now when it came to Stock Value they were a bit more stern with him. I wanted to portray the nobles as not always money grabbers but that they do have some legitimate good in them. However not all the nobles are like that as we see in the canon.

Which is why I made Jet Set and Upper Crust a little more careless with the damage they were causing in the city. And just wait how they'll act when they have to see Rarity and the mane 6 again in a bit.

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Glad to hear that! That was really what I was going for when I introduced the new characters. But when the climax comes they'll have that snooty behavior full force with a hint of well being. After all, they did all become giants for a reason, and that reason was to gain some more benefits for themselves.

Hey everyone, I'm so sorry for the slow update, things have been crazy with the semester so far and I've bearly had time to write the next chapter. It's about a quarter done so I'll try to get it out before we get into October.

Till then,
Keep it real everyone!

The picture I got early on was that Sturdy was just along for the ride, but the events here seem to have given her a sense of purpose from her transformation.

Good on Sturdy for helping Thimble and his family. One thing that confused me though is in Chapter 2 she said she was a boxer and here she says she's a wrestler. Can't wait for the final chapter.

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Thanks for noticing, the plan I had for her was that she would undergo some type of character growth and better herself, so I thought, what better way to do that than interacting with one of her young fans. She was initially a bit egocentric and was along for the ride, but her heart was in the right place because she did want to spend time with her fans instead of going along with Blueblood or the other two noble groups. She had potential for change and she went for it. Out of all the nobles, Sturdy was a definite favorite to write.

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Happy you enjoyed! And thanks for catching my mistake, I'll go and correct it.

FINAL CHAPTER UPDATE: This is going to be the longest chapter I have written yet so it's taking quite a bit, it's currently halfway done so I'll try to get it up as soon as possible

Blueblood's punishment made me howl with laughter.

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Lol, I was hoping it would. Lil' Blueblood got a taste of his own medicine

It looks like you did some of this chapter in a hurry. For example you say that the mane 6, spike and both princesses were deposited in Upper Crust's and Jet Set's hooves; considering how big their hooves are that would mean either all of them were in the same hoof or they were divided between the two.

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Sorry if it wasn't clear, they were supposed to be divided between the two, if there were any more mistakes feel free to let me know!

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I'm glad you liked it, hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

hey just one thing when are you going to make mega macintosh and holiday Love Keeps Getting Bigger?

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Hey thanks for the question! Currently I'm working on the next and final chapter for Growing Confidence (coming along a little slowly due to my finals for the semester), then I'm planning on getting 'Holiday Love Keeps Getting Bigger' out before Christmas (hopefully on the 24th due to what will happen in story) and I've already started writing out the first chapter for MEGA Macintosh. Hope you'll enjoy when the stories are published

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But the fear didn’t stop there, because Blueblood looked past Luna in his panic and was able to make out the background setting. That being Luna’s room. A pit formed in Blueblood’s stomach as he realized what was going on. Luna wasn’t giant, he was tiny, like really, really, REALLY tiny. And his glass “prison” wasn’t even a prison, it was a glass jar.

His Karma has Run over his Dogma.

Nightmare Moon said nothing as she plopped down on her hunches, still grinning. The impact of her gigantic moons hitting the ground shook Blueblood off his hooves and onto the ground. As he got back onto his hooves, he looked upwards and saw that his mountainous aunt had materialized a skyscraper sized book into her hooves. Nightmare Moon glanced down at Blueblood with another evil grin “Your punishment I have laid out little colt is this: since you forced the entire population of Canterlot to listen to your boring speech about what you wanted to do with the extra bits, now I’m going to make you listen to the most boring book in existence, Moby Dick. You will remain shrunken down for the whole day as you listen to me read this to you! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!” Nightmare Moon cackled as she opened the book, ignoring Blueblood’s high pitched squeals of terror

could be worse it could have been the tax code.

Enterprise dropped the miniature cart into his vest pocket

Hang about. I don't recall him showing it to the Princesses, what happened to it after the spell wears off?

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It's safe to assume that after the spell wore off in the final chapter. It was automatically transported out of his pocket and fell to the ground. I was going for cartoon physics for when the spell wore off

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Ah. Wasn't sure if it fell or if it might've shrunk with him.

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No worries. I thought about it but realized that wouldn't make any sense because the cart didn't have any spell casted on it. So there'd be no reason why it would shrink

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