Twilight, Pinkie, AJ, and Rarity no longer remember anything about the Secret of the Pegasi, but there's one thing Rainbow and Fluttershy overlooked: how did the letter that Twilight wrote about the Secret get to Celestia?
Exactly.
When Twilight comes stumbling back home with a hangover and no memory of the previous day, Spike discovers that he's suddenly alone in knowing about the mystery of removable wings. An off-handed comment by the worn-out unicorn prompts Spike into an investigation that will shed more light on the truth behind the conspiracy and raise even more questions.
Chapters (1)
Haven't I seen this before?
Hmm. Must be going crazy. It sure looks the same....
Anyway, weither or not I've read this before, i'll review it. Preparing the sonic fine-tooth comb now...
Love the concept. Completely original, and always amusing. In the famous words of Wheezy, "LOOOOOOOVVVVEEEEE IT!"
(If you don't get the reference, you're not old enough.)
Errors: “thank goodness you had the state of mind..." Should be capitalized. This is a reoccruing error, should be picked up by a Pre-reader. Which, by the way, you either already have an amazing one, or are an amazing editor yourself. Congratz on a (For the most part) lack of errors!
Storywise: I thought it flowed well. Wonderful transitions, everything In-Character... As Rarity would say, "Marvelous, Darling!"
Again, great work! I will definitely recommend this, as well as the Secret of the Pegasi, to my other Bronies!
-The Librarian
I originally posted this on fanfiction.net and got it onto Equestria Daily, but since it's a one chapter one-shot, I figured it was worth the effort of putting here as well.
92205 Wonderful! As much as I frequent the site, I don't have a Fanfiction.net account. Probably should get one....
Anyway, I CALLED seeing it before! Look forward to more!
-The Librarian
Agh!
Perhaps I am the only one,
but a sequel(Of Sorts),
or a continue-ation would be well appreciated!
Are you going to continue this with multiple stories, or new chapters?
Doesn't need a continuation, cos its obvious that Celestia erases all their memories
Okay, these two fanfics were two of the strangest and most hilarious stories I've ever read.
It would be really cool, if you continued the story.
And a bit of speculation. I think I know the reason, why all of this is such a huge secret. Because, if everypony knew, that the horns, the wings and the tail on the pony are removable and that Celestia is the keeper of those secrets, they'd eventually conclude that the same applies to the Princesses themselves (because, alicorn = earth pony + pegasus + unicorn) and would try to remove their wings/horns/tails, which would leave them completely powerless. Just a thought ;).
I normally don't like "Random" fics, but I've been enjoying the rest of your stuff, so I figured I'd give this one a chance. The randomness feels a bit like Looney Tunes or an old Disney short-- a very pleasant association. This one really worked for me and I think a large part of that was, in contrast to many "random" fics, the world had gone screwy but everyone in it was largely still in character.
Overall, a delightful little romp.
This fic was glorious! Loved every minute of it.
Please! More! I wanna know more about the conspiracy!
Thx
Came back to this about eight years after reading it the first time while I was looking for a section from one of your other stories. I still think of this story sometimes, and I wonder if the lack of a sequel is intentional to demonstrate that everyone forgot everything else due to Celestia. If it is, that's clever! But if it isn't, it's still something I'd love to read.