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I want a sequel. This is just too funny to be left at this.
OH NO yes this needs a sequel if an extra moon is an issue extra suns will be a bigger one
I wonder if this is like some kind of courtship to the two sisters by friendly celestial bodies. Or are these just Dead space like galactic bodies hitting on the 2 sisters own.
I can imagine the blushes.
Poor Luna. She doesn't get paid enough for this.
I wanted to point out that you accidentally went into present tense for this paragraph. Otherwise, very good, very funny.
Wow, this'll get popular really quick. ππ
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That was deliberate. It's Celestia's morning routine running through her head as she does it.
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Oops, nevermind then.
That was pretty cute, particularly the ending. The fancy shoe thingy is on the other hoof now, Celestia.
"Hey, this moon followed me home...can we keep it?"
That was adorable...
Aaaaand.... I'll admit, the first thing I thought of when the little moon showed up was this picture.
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At first I thought the pink moon was called into being by Cadence. But then that twist at the end happened and now I don't know what to think.
All in all very cute.
What a wonderful story to read before bed! <3
I'd like more.
This Seriously needs a Sequel.
Oh, my gosh, that was funny!! I didn't just LOL, I cackled at the ending. I normally hate comments begging for sequels, but I'd love to read what happens next!
It's too bad the moon was pink and the suns were blue, but I still think this is appropriate: