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Takes place during Stare Master.
Twilight Sparkle has just been rescued by Fluttershy from a deadly cockatrice and brought back from solid stone to flesh and blood. But after returning home, Spike is worried more than ever for Twilight. How will this crisis resolve by the next day?
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That was sweet
That was pretty sweet at the end. And I appreciate that Fluttershy had the courage to point out to Twilight what was troubling Spike about the cockatrice.
That is so sweet
I mean if it wasn't for the Cutie Mark Crusaders and Fluttershy went to the forest they would not know but then again I'm sure they were going to find her regardless because she's Princess Celestia's student
Well that was random then again that's Pinkie Pie
Well snakes have big appetite I mean look what happened to the elephant in season 9
What are you a Pokemon
You don't need to apologize Fluttershy you have to say something because Twilight is being unreasonable again
I will say this was a pretty sweet story and random at the same time so it looks like Spike was scared for Twilight after the event of the Stare master and he really don't want nothing to happen to her and Twilight was getting a little frustrated but then Fluttershy told her that Spike was just scared of losing Twilight and it made her realize how much he really cares and she felt even guilty and she went over to apologize and even comforting him again that's so sweet story here keep up the good work
Hello! I know I've already said this elsewhere, but here's your courtesy note about the review I did. This is reminiscent of some early stuff by The Descendant, I think, especially in its good role for Spike. Fluttershy's tone towards Spike is nice, too. The fic is a bit rough around the edges, for example in tense mismatches. With that kind of thing tidied and tightened, this could go up a notch.