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After detecting the residual remains of a massive chaotic anomaly, Twilight Sparkle heads to Gravity Falls to research the aftereffects of Weirdmageddon. She tries to question the local townspeople but finds that no one will talk about it, causing her to become increasingly frustrated.
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Que interesante historia, me mato de risa lo de las hadas
Aunque me hubiera gustado que Twilight se encontrara con los otros unicornios, me hubiese interesado como hubiera sido
Nice story, like the concept, and the execution is pretty well done, some rough edges, but almost every story has those, didn’t notice too many spelling mistakes, not sure if the ‘surprise’ is either broken, or I did something wrong, just saying you might wanna check if you did it right.
Edit: Got it, there’s a lower case r after the lowercase c, and its supposed to be a (an?) o, anyway, hope you fix this, cheers!
A fun little read. While I usually don't like crossovers, it really seems to fit in this case, the weirdness of Gravity Falls makes the appearance of Twilight seem kind of normal. I find it hilarious that no one even questions that a talking alicorn is walking through town and interviewing people: Oh a talking pony, must be a Tuesday
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Also, both the premise and the conclusion are quite good, I like the scene with Soos especially. So good job overall
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There is just one thing I have to ask: Is there a deeper meaning behind the text during the scene changes or is it just to mimic the show? And if yes, could I get a hint
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Edit: Nevermind, just got it thanks to a small hint from Foxtrot-Mayflower. Another nice detail to put into the story
It was different but it was funny.
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I'm glad you liked it, have you found the other secrets?
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. The only other thing I noticed, was that the same cipher was used while Twilight went around town. Maybe there is a hidden message in the screams at the end, as there is a pattern to them 
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Oh, I for sure didn't
While I really love all the mystery and hidden codes in Gravity Falls, I am unfortunately not very good at spotting them
. I think that makes me like them even more as I am extra happy when I find one on my own 
. So during the show, I mostly looked up all the hidden clues, as I am just too curious and impatient to try and find them all on my own 
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Okay, here's a hint. Throughout the story, if you pay attention, you'll notice that there are a lot of capitalized words that shouldn't be capitalized, there might be a reason for that.
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Hey, I forgot to ask, where in the story is the error you mentioned above?
This is somewhere around after the middle of the story
“i” translates to the wrong letter, as long as I did the correct thing, all I know is that I got R, not sure if I was just supposed to fix it myself as part of the challenge, or if it’s misspelled now that I think about.
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(P.S. how did I forget to tell you where it’s at? Must be the pfp rubbing off.)
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Time to whip out the pen and paper then
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Yeah, I just checked and you were right, apparently, I mistook that "l" for an "i" so I went ahead and fixed it.
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Great, thanks and sorry for forgetting to specify the problem, hope you have a good one!