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After an awkward conversation on Hearts and Hooves Day, Spike realizes his heart may belong to a different white unicorn

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 5 )

Cute so far, I hope to see more!

One issue is that your chapters are too short. Either flesh them out or just have one chapter

Sweetie Belle paced around her room, deep in thought. She hated seeing Spike so sad. He was always so helpful and nice to her sister. His adorable smile, the way his green eyes sparkled...

To him I bequeath... A boot to the head. And another corJenny and the wimp

Cute tiny story. I like it. Another!

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