"Jimmy Hook's the Name, Transformations is my Game" (Victim of The Cursed Gift since September 2016)
It is said that in times of danger, heroes will come together to face the rising tide of evil, and fight back to preserve the light. These heroes can come from the strangest of places.
This is the story of one such hero. Although she appears to be Pipp Petals, you may be surprised to learn her true origins...
Part of the Rebirth of Magic continuity. Tags will be updated as the story continues. Written as part of 40 years of My Little Pony.
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Well, hey there. Again, you did a really good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Loved the bit with the chat with the interviewer at the beginning as well as showing how this person got transformed into Pipp and that encounter with one of Pipp's fans before breaking into song. That means this month is going to focused on "Haven" and "Pipp".
So the final two stories in Phase One of this series (which will be starting next month) are going to be Hitch and somebody else as yet unrevealed. That's cool. And then, of course, in July we're going to be wondering which two of the eight stories are going to get more chapters first. Again, that's cool. Just something to really look forward to.
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Naturally :3
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We like to keep our readers guessing.
JIMMY!
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Youre a good writer jimmy
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Hey =3
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Naturally :3
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Thanks!
Keep on shining
may the stars shine down on you
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You're welcome :3
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Squee
What the fuck is this story
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Rude much? >:/
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Nice :3
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Thanks for the defend.
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It's part of a wider series entitled Rebirth of Magic. To summarise rapidly, human beings find themselves within the world of G5 as ponies!
I can link the rest of the series if you wish to learn more.
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Awesome :3
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Link me
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I just invited you to the group where the stories are collected. Direct links to the other stories are down below:
- MLP Gen 5
- Adventure
- Comedy
The life and times of a flightless princess.- MLP Gen 5
- Adventure
- Comedy
The life and times of a unicorn who thought outside the box.- MLP Gen 5
- Adventure
- Comedy
The life and times of an Earth Pony determined to be herself.- MLP Gen 5
- Adventure
- Comedy
The life and times of a pony caught between conscience and duty.- MLP Gen 5
- Adventure
- Comedy
The life and times of a Queen torn between tradition and the future.Have fun!
Again, this is a well done chapter with some really good exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Greatly enjoyed "Pipp's" observations concerning the situation and the size of her room as well as probably tapping into Pipp's memories to get the password for her phone. Also liked "Zipp" getting "her sister" to get at least a little exercise, much to "Haven's" bemusement.
REALLY looking forward to more of this.
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Of course :3
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We hid a subtle reference to Pipp's VA in this chapter. See if you can spot it.
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Hello, folks. Jimmy has new chapters if you weren't aware.
Yet another well done chapter. The effort going into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up is both apparent and appreciated. Certainly respected "Pipp's" frustration concerning how her day was going and "Zipp" and "Pipp's" discussion concerning what's anti-social and what isn't (particularly the stuff about in-person shopping before the stuff about "full name ultimatums" and bribery). And, yeah, the nod to "Zipp's" story was great stuff as was "Zipp" and "Pipp's" chat at the end of the chapter.
Very definitely looking forward to more of this.
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Awesome =3
And heh... might wanna check a comment I left for ya back on Monday. =3
Another well done job on the characterizations, recall, added details and future chapter set-up in this chapter. Definitely appreciated "Pipp" reflecting on the clues that "Zipp" is another human-turned-pony before that added peek at the work going into
"Pipp's" commercial AND movie cameo. REALLY liked that reflection on her charity work as well.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
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Obviously. ^^
Tom Cruise, actually. Cruise portrays Ethan Hunt in the Mission Impossible film series.
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Ah frick.
I swear... when I saw the Hooves part, I thought it was like say Hanks because they both start with an H and end with a S. ^^'
Anywho... gotten it fixed. :)
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Right.
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Smile.
Well, that's a rap for now.
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Indeed
Once again, you did a really good job on the extra details, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked that stuff in Hoofington with "Pipp" spending time with her fans as well as the stuff from chapter five of "Zipp's" story, but from "Pipp's" point of view. And much like "Sunny" and "Izzy" I have a hunch they will BOTH find out the other is a transformed human in one of the chapters in two months, even if they won't know about "Haven" being this yet.
REALLY looking forward to the final two stories and more chapters of the six stories already running.
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And of course... plenty of avatar switching around regarding for of Izzy, Misty, and Pipp whenever a chapter for them is updated.
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Subtle? You blatantly told us the name!
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Hey, we can't all be perfect with our hints. :P
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No, that's not it. Look closer in the chapter, and you may see it.
Of course there was the one embarrassing time awhile back when Tom Hooves got himself trapped in Zipp's closet and
wouldn'tcouldn't get out. Remember that? . . . It's ok, I don't remember much of it either.. . . Does Zipp even have a closet? . . . Um, it's about Zipp not seeming like much of a clotheshorse, not because um. . . 0_0'
Hey, in which case there WOULD be a closet, dummy! =P
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Heh. :)
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I suspect Zipp is 'required' to sometimes wear regalia or something fancy. I also suspect she tries to find every conceivable excuse to get out of it.
Glad to see the next batch of chapters for this story started. REALLY love the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely loved the chat "Pipp" had with "Zipp" in the latter's lab from the former's point of view (especially with them mentioning how they are both humans turned ponies and how the current circumstances are too fantastic to be easily believed and the reflections on the walks).
Quite certainly looking forward to more of this.
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Naturally :3
Well, definitely appreciated "Pipp's" reflections on the military - both on how boring the duty is, yet how important a good military is on maintaining an effective peace (though, at the same time, a military needs the right balance between vigilant, patient and restrained). Also liked the chat with "Zipp" concerning characterization and investigation (with detective work requiring knowing how to use the right equipment as well as staying observant). And, yeah, explaining the "spa deal" with "Haven" was cute too.
Again, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are very well done and I'm definitely looking forward to more of this.
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Of course :3
Another really well done chapter with some great dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. REALLY loved the work shown going into the preparations for the song as well as "Haven's" constructive criticism concerning such things as the song tempo and the lighting. As well as the reaction to "Misty's" foiled 3 AM attack.
And, yes, really looking forward to more of this.
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Naturally for sure, Comickook :3
(Apologies if the reply took a while: Was in the midst of a shower btw. :P)
Another well done chapter with some really good dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Certainly liked this stuff from previous chapters in earlier stories as seen from "Pipp's" point of view as well as catching that text from "Zipp" because they don't YET know that they are also former humans-turned-ponies.
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Much obliged. ^^
Again, this was a rather well done chapter with some wonderful work on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Really liked "Pipp" acknowledging that the readers already know most of the important details thus far as well as reflecting on the upsides and downsides of the elaborate meal, the chat with "Haven" after the meal and the lead-off to the third phase.
VERY much looking forward to more of this not just the next batch for "Hitch" and "Sprout", which will be next month, but also Phase 3 ("Zipp" and "Izzy" in November, "Sunny" and "Misty" in December, "Haven" and "Pipp" again in January of next year and then "Hitch" and "Sprout" again in February of next year).