• Published 29th Jun 2023
  • 1,347 Views, 4 Comments

Smolder's Sapphic Secret - Omegathyst



As Smolder grows into an adult with her own pursuits as a personal workout trainer for pony ladies, she gets a letter from Princess Cadance, starting a confrontation at the Crystal Empire that flips Smolder's life for the better...

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For those who want to see the full version of the cover pic, check out 2548113 on Derpi (or check out 2548116 for the futa version).

Haven’t read it yet but damn! You really love Smolder!

This is interesting. Read the contained elements in the descriptions after the story and realized that it's basically a summary of the story and actually spoils every surprise in here lol.
And I'm surprised that Smolder here is the "denial" character, given your other stories where she does stuff with mares, but I'm not complaining since it was interesting. The princess of love being bisexual certainly made sense here. And The "emotions" part here did its job as well, seeing how Smolder get really aggressive And Cadance confess about being unsatisfied, And the one night stand thought part in the end was intriguing. It's thought-provoking And leaves a bait to a sequel, which is pretty cool. I also have the feeling that it progressed a little too fast and since there are already emotional elements, they should be explored more when they're not.
Keep up the nice job and have fun writing.

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it's basically a summary of the story and actually spoils every surprise in here lol.

That's why it has the spoiler filter over it? 😆
And she usually is in a level of denial with the other stories as well, it's just not as drama-based as this one. Glad you liked it!

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