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Shining! You do know you live in a world of magic right? Just find a spell to make your dick bigger, asked Twilight for help, hell there's a zebra in ponyville that specializes in making potions. I'm sure she could easily help your dilemma of giving you the greatest biggest and well-defined cock in history that will most definitely satisfy Cadance.
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Ha! Thanks for the comment! It's the first comment on my first story so I really appreciate it. Also, funny to think that there probably would be a lot of different magic and potions and such for the bedroom. Maybe that's an idea for another story...?
In any case, thanks again! If you have any feedback or critique I'd be glad to listen. Have a good day!
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Now that I think about it. Why didn't Cadance think of doing that for Shining in the first place? I'm sure she could have helped him by making his cock bigger herself or at the very least look for help.
Considering just how much she's been enjoying cheating on him. Making him a pathetic cuck was just as thrilling as getting those big cocks she always wanted.
Of all the entries in the contest, this one is, in my personal opinion, closest to what the spirit of the contest was aiming for.
There's not much plot or backstory, and there doesn't need to be. Cadance finds her husband unsatisfactory sexually, so she cheats on him. She has no regrets, because the sex is pleasurable. She knows he still loves her, so she uses that to maintain control of him so she can still cheat. Again, she has no regrets because she gets everything (and everyone) she wants.
Straight and simple.
The dialogue is abit on-the-nose, but, again, that's what the story (and the spirit of the contest, in my opinion) calls for; a cheating Cadance who indulges in the act. After all, as Cadance says, the Princess of love needs a lot of love.
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Thank you very much for the polite and well-written comment! And you were very insightful too, you nailed exactly what I was trying to do with focusing on the cuckolding/cheating element. Really appreciate you saying it captured the spirit of the contest, since I'm a new author that means a lot to me.
If you have any comments or suggestions for this or for future stories I'd be glad to listen!
In any case, thanks again for the comment! Hope you have a good day!
If Twilight found out that her brother was being cheated on by Cadence she would go nuclear on her
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Realistically you're right! Also Cadance would probably never actually cheat on Shining. But that's what the contest this story was written for was about.
Thanks for the comment, really appreciate it!