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Not bad. I'm curious why most of it is in italic.

11870468
The italics broke loose.

Awesome story! 10/10 would love to see more with this dynamic between Chrysalis and Shining.

Him being manipulated by her is the most enjoyable part

11870468
Fixed now, thanks.

I know this was probably created just for the clop but you could honestly make a fairly decent story for this…

Shining becomes obsessed with Chrissy but still loves his wife. Cadence feels his love shifting but ignores it thinking it’s an after effect and they still have Flurry eventually. Chrissy starts feeling actual love back for Shining and doesn’t want to loose him to time so converts him into a changeling prince, he has to hide the change from Cadence but fails. Cadence turns to the dark side all while Chrissy is becoming a reformed Ling due to Shining’s passionate love and they have a foal together the same age as Flurry…

Or something like that.

from the description:

"He was under his control, its not his fault he enjoyed it, right?"

He was under HER* control

Shining Armour's approach silenced the minimal chatter between the guards, their postures stiffening in respect. With a nod from him, one of the guards unlocked the heavy door, the loud lock creaking as the key was turned in the otherwise silent corridor. Shining suddenly thought of something.
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I should let these guards go; I am strong enough to control their prisoner, and besides, I have some business to settle, the fewer people that heard it, the better.

Where I put the '-' is how many you had, It only needs one. Please fix this.

Also It's Armor, not Armour. The only way it was spelled like that is if you're from the UK.

11872048
I cannot confirm or deny my location

11871922
Thanks, yeah I just thought the dynamic would be pretty hot to write about to be honest. Writing more for the dynamic is something I have thought about, but I just wanted to write some clop to contribute to the mind control group on here.

11872120
Nice fic do you have any other plans.

New hypnofic author! Sweet!

For those interested in seeing the full version of the cover pic, check out 2010748 on Derpi (with variations at 2013082 and 2013126).

Hope you do a part 2 where she it's pregnant and rubbing it in princess Cadence's face.

11872048
Or, ya know, any where else in the English speaking world. Americas the only place without the U in Armour.

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