The Mean Princess

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GlitchyFox

GlitchyFox #1 · Dec 12th, 2023 · 3 · · Chapter 1: In the Moonlight of the Everfree ·

be funny if nobody finds out about the switch till the original just comes back

G33kySt3v3

G33kySt3v3 #2 · Dec 13th, 2023 · 3 · · Chapter 1: In the Moonlight of the Everfree ·

Poor Twilight, turned to stone again... You'd think an alicorn would be more resistant to a cockatrice but apparently she had barely a moment to comprehend the red eyes before she was stone once more, and I have a feeling that Fluttershy isn't going to be able to save her for quite awhile... Otherwise this story premise seems quite interesting, so have an upvote and a spot in my Tracking list.

Sahelanthropus

Sahelanthropus #3 · Dec 13th, 2023 · 2 · · Chapter 1: In the Moonlight of the Everfree ·

Consider me intrigued. Let's see where you take this story.

CrimsonS4ge

CrimsonS4ge #4 · Dec 13th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 1: In the Moonlight of the Everfree ·

Very interesting. I eagerly await for more.

GlitchyFox

GlitchyFox #5 · January 13th · 2 · · Chapter 2: Fish Out of Water ·

i feel like twilight is gonna come back later in the story and make freinds with her other self

Darth_krayt

Darth_krayt #6 · January 13th · · · Chapter 2: Fish Out of Water ·

I wonder if mean Twilight will try to seduce shining armor.

CrimsonS4ge

CrimsonS4ge #7 · January 13th · 4 · · Chapter 2: Fish Out of Water ·

Very interesting story so far. I've seen a fair few stories take a crack at the trope of a character that has to bluff their way through a situation that they are totally ignorant about. Eg. "My Twilight Facade".

However, a character that is so ignorant that they don't even comprehend basic concepts like armour or hierarchy. It's a super unique concept and I'm excited to see where it goes.

Dreamy Days

Dreamy Days #8 · January 13th · 2 · · Chapter 2: Fish Out of Water ·

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Thanks. I loved My Twilight Facade, and wanting to see it completed was part of what inspired this story. And of course we can't forget the countless stories of changelings bluffing when they infiltrate pony society I've read. I have quite an affinity for those kinds of plots, and I love what I came up with for this story. I'd love to share it with y'all faster and update more frequently, but unfortunately I'm really busy with work. Hopefully that will change soon.

Communist_Egor