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Jet Howitzer


If you close your eyes, it's like nothing's ever changed.

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Life is hard to deal with. Whether the problems are internal, or external, it's never easy. Finding a good outlet for your problems is a good way to reduce the stress of life, but when the outlet is another pony, with problems of her own, you may find your own problems taking an unwarranted backseat to theirs.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 187 )

I am interested to see where things will go.

Cant wait to read another.

:rainbowlaugh:thats awsome, i cracked at the friend zone comment

:heart: Looking forward to the rest of this story!

Keep up the good work Jet. :pinkiehappy:

...Finally, someone who rages in the friendzone.

1389727 It's not so much that he's in the friendzone, as much as it is that he has some anger management issues. Although I'll be exploring those as the story progresses. Although he is pissed about the friendzone.

this looks really good

Amazing as usual Howie! :scootangel:

Is this in the same universe as The color of apples and the others?

this is awsome not often i find alot of vinyll scratch romances that doesnt involve octavia

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Howdy seeing this story made my day. Thank you:rainbowkiss:

That was fantastic!

1392765 Nope. I'm trying to make a new universe where the main 6 won't see any action at my hands. Or maybe they will, but the focus will be on background ponies. No idea who's next, but I don't have to worry about that yet, since this one is only just getting started.

1393167 Oh ok. Sounds cool. Maybe Octavia in love with a rich 15 year old human that wound up in Equestria because Celestia messed up. The human is Celestia and Luna's closest advisor, a weapons developer lives in a room in the castle, and has a Range Rover( because Celestia made up for bringing him here by teleporting it to him from earth) The humans name is Kyle Pearce. If you don't like the idea, don't worry, it was joke.

Great job Howie, cant wait for some moar.

:pinkiegasp: holy crap, a vinyl scratch second person romance, you dont see that very often...which is a shame, considering she is my favorite pony

1394776 I know. And there will be more.

Absolutely wonderful. MOAR:flutterrage: PLEASE

1396043 Maybe once you get further into the plot you'll see that this won't be such a happy tale. But that's going to be in a while, probably not for a couple of chapters.

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It's ok, I'm alright with the sad stuff. I was just saying that I adore your work because you're an amazing writer, and that you seem to have some mysterious power to keep me reading your stories.

1396055 It's called progressive plot development. I've made it clear that there's quite a bit going on, but most of it is unclear, and so you want to know what happens. I gave you enough for you to be pleased, but not enough for you to be able to figure out what's going to happen. Suspense, in a nutshell.

Now you've ruined the majicks... Oh well, Imma read anyways

1396083 Knowing how I keep you enthralled isn't ruining the magics. Just explaining a very basic literary device.

That was brilliant. I enjoyed the flashbacks which added a nice smidge, and its a good story with a good plot heehee. No grammatical errors found. Keep up good work, keep me posted.

Awesome, as always. I like the fact that it's sorta sad - I get the feeling that, near the end of the story, it's going to get rather bittersweet. And I like that.

Vinyl is mah favorite pony, but your other stories were cool as shiz... With this though, you have a dedicated as tartarus fan.

Let's just say, I'm loving it so far.:eeyup:

Wow. This story is great! I'll be sure to be keeping tabs on this one! I love it~

I think you should add a "Sad" tag to it. I almost cried, dang it! :fluttercry:

Sleep? Slefp I'd five bsbiez.

Haha mother fucker got friend zoned

1404580 Yes he did. And it's not a nice place to be.

1404630 Good thing Note is such a groovy pony, since he's going to be doing quite a bit for Vinyl. Despite being in the friend zone.

1404640 Okay his name is note and doing things for vinyl can be taken in different ways.

Am I high as hell or is this humanized?

1404751 They are ponies. Did I say something about person, or hands, or anything like that? I don't think I did, but if I'm wrong let me know.

1404758 No, you didn't I just shouldn't be reading at 1am.

Hmm, awww yeah this is gonna be great. I am really Into those flashbacks. Keep p the good work.

im really glad you're doing this story:pinkiehappy:. outside of clopfics, there are literally NO second person shipping stories with vinyl scratch:ajsleepy:

“My request, then, is that you become less of a bitch. You need to quit abusing other ponies for your own amusement. And, for the record, you’re not as hot as you think. Your flanks don’t hold a candle to Miss Quizzical’s.”

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1403876 i had been up for a day and a half and was about to crash. and my ipod's autocorrect is broken.

Let's see, we're supposed to gracefully inform everypony that sees our sister as some paragon that she was merely a pony, not too hard; rebuild some sort of relationship with Vinyl Scratch, could be, probably will be, much more difficult; have multiple flashbacks that inform us of our past and connections to the mare; probably beat the ever-living shit out of Vinyl's ex, going from Apples: this should be interesting; and deal with our anger issues. Seems like we've a busy schedule...

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probably beat the ever-living shit out of Vinyl's ex

Why would we do that?

Hmmm....
Octavia had a coltfriend?
I wonder if he'll be reveled....
For now, my mind will assume it's Symphonic Keys (a character from an Octavia second-person story)

Nice story man. And another favorite to you:moustache:

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Well, combining anger issues and the likelihood (I never was good with probability anyways) that Vinyl's ex DID hurt her, and she's hiding it, we may allow ourselves to become drunken with rage, or we might confront him and he might just be a dick anyways and initiate the fight. I'm just speculating, and once again, not that great at probability. I'll just keep my speculation to myself

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