A young colt tries to write a note to the filly who holds his heart, but he finds that his mind holds him back.
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Jet Howitzer
If you close your eyes, it's like nothing's ever changed.
Jet Howitzer
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Scootaloo?
Let's see what unfolds.
Comment: Nice read. Cute and simple. There is a bit of a life lesson there.
This sounds adorable! Time to read!
Edit: That was very sweet and cute, keep on writing Jet!
This story gave me the warm fuzzies.
Short and sweet and very cute.
Fun little one shot, no doubt of that. You slipped into second person for a bit on one of the paragraphs, though.
This put a smile on my face.
D'awww!!!
I find it slightly humiliating that this colt had the guts to do what I never could. I had many crushes in elementary, but I'm not exactly appealing in a romantic way. I've never had anyone like me that I liked back.
...
...Wait, I've never had anyone like me at all!
He who hesitates is forever alone.
*swoon! Short but SUPER effective!
Heart has fainted!
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The thing is to find someone who you like, not who is like you. Someone who can put up with your shortcomings as much as you can theirs. Difference works when both parties are willing to listen.
Hoo Scootaloo
Hey, this story was so short and sweet. So I promoted this and all your other stories on a blog post on my page. I only have 4 followers, but every little bit counts right?
1463103 This is true.
1463168 I've been following you for quite some time now. The first story of yours I read was The Color of Apples back in August. I finally decided to get off my butt and read the others. I'm 70% done with I Would Give to You. After that what comes next, Faux Pas or Rising Sun.
1463278 Faux Pas. Although technically Rising Sun is a prequel to all of them.
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I meant that nopony has ever felt a romantic 
attraction to me. I didn't mean there were too many differences; For love, I would forgive many a shortcoming. 
I think maybe you misunderstood?
I may never have a marefriend, and I certainly don't want a coltfriend, so I'm literally forever alone.
I'm not sad, though. Lonely, definitely, but not sad. I guess the lonely life suits me, no matter how much it didn't...
(Indecisive trails off wistfully, looking at the ground.)
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Coulda. Well, for some it takes longer than others. I wouldn't say forever alone. Christopher Robin once sang, "Forever is a really long time, Pooh", and it is. Chin up - you'll eventually find the mare of your dreams, or most likely a reasonable facsimile, and you'll be clammy as a hap.
Waitasec...
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Had me smiling at the end!
Sadly my friend i know that... 3 times over...
How sad. But this story was cute!
i Feel a Reading Coming on!
Oh and DAWWW
Nice, only caught one error.
Colt's?
And that's it! Great job, nice moral, and itching to find who the colt was. I expect moar from you. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png
That just restarted my heart,
SO MUCH DAWWW!
Awesome story Jet!
This gave me the warm fuzzies. Also, inb4 feature, I bet.
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Me too, man. Me too.
....Although me getting together with one of my past girl bullies that would be a boy now?
DOES NOT WANT.