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This story is a sequel to Apple Bloom Meets Mr. Widemouth
Sweetie Belle feels insecure about a lot of things. She's not as pretty as her sister, she's not good with her magic, and she even feels less than equal to her friends. While contemplating these feelings, she meets a strange little creature, named Mr. Widemouth, who says he knows a way for her to better herself.
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Is this the story where Mr. Widemouth is finally destroyed?
Only one comment? Well, now, that won't do. This may not be a "great" story by itself, but it's a satisfying conclusion to a fascinating trilogy. Far too many of Fimfic's multi-part stories are incomplete.
Have a Spikestache.
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I probably would've written it as one story if I had intended to write one for each of the CMC from the start, but when I thought of Scootaloo Meets Mr. Widemouth, I didn't know if I wanted to continue it or not.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed the story.
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I understand completely. That one gets awfully dark at the end.
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Well, the first one's ending was meant to mirror the dark twist of the original Mr. Widemouth creepypasta, so.
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I just Googled "Mr. Widemouth," and found the original story. I think you nailed the character. I'll blame you if I have nightmares tonight.
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One of my favorite creepypastas.
This trilogy has me conflicted.
On the one hand I'm happy that this scary little creepo was caught, on the other, I feel that the final note of 'Happy Ending' goes against the spirit of the creepypastas that created that demon.
Above all, good stories.
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Well, not every creepypasta ends on a downer note.
Glad you enjoyed it overall.