Schorl Tourmaline
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Dainn!
I'm gonna kill him!
Okay, that was cool
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Wrong setting. This is minotaur, not caribou.
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My bad.
The first part kind of threw me off because it seems like her future self wants. What happens to her in her passive does not so is that really rape?
Since it seems they're not the first gift givers, I wonder how many have been droven insane by their powers.
How fast does she go completely insane from looking into the future?
Reckless.
Bondage.
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How did I fuck that up? It's one of my favorite words >.<;
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How did they take over the Kirins? And what happen to them.
Have you met the emperor children
You son of bitch!!!!
Fucked you to the deepest pits of hell!
I hope the one we’re following does end this somehow. And prevent the mintourars from doing this or taking over.
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Can I say something please?
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Umm... sure, I won't stop you.
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So if the present one is there. Then what happen to furture versiom that she switched with?
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The Future version of Alice, to my understanding, is now in the present for the time. Present Alice took Future Alice's place, so they swapped roles/times.
Hopefully she will stop this from happening in the first place and prevent the mintators from taking over the world
I think you handle the time travel aspects of this fic really well.
Not the first time this has happened to you, I feel.
I think I see where you are going with this. The Minotaur don't have that ability but they have a certain future doe who is now more than willing to accept her new role and use her abilities to aid the Minotaur.
Found a typo repeated words "talking about"
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I fixed it, and thanks for the catch
If they can control time, yet feel obligated to pay off debt, what kind of scary K3 civilization-tier loan shark did they piss off?
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Agreed.
Plus if I was in the same position, I wouldn’t trust my future self. And if anything is worth saving to endure all of this. Than no I would rather have freedom than this
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Always happy to help ^^
Wasn't expecting this to tie into the ETS series. Fun surprise.
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Yeah, Minopolis has been referred to a few times in Equestria Trainers' Society, but hasn't properly been explored yet. This story is also loosely connected to Deep In the Thicket, which is another story of mine where minotaur invade a deer civilization. Meant to put that in the author's notes of this chapter, but I forgot.
I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW SHE MIGHT HAVE SOMETHING TO DO WITH THIS!!!
Waaiiiiiiiiiittttt a minute... FREAKING AURORA is responsible for all of this?!?!
Now THAT'S a twist I wasn't expecting.
Well for them probably but humans not really and all you need to do is get some intel or a map of the city and key faculties or installations to slow them down or a response. Plus there is always gurllia warfare.
That son of a bitch
Oh shit. She works for them!
Since it's Christmas time, does that mean we'll get to see what happened now in the next story?
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Maybu o3o
That's new one. I thought that story was done the last time I been there.
Ooh cool - it continues! Looking forward to reading it!
still curious to see where it goes - good work!
That's a neat implication that the show's timeline could be a result of fate actually being changed while this timeline is the "true" one fate intended. Personally, if I was in Alice's place I would try small changes to test fate. Something basic like what I eat or wear that day, just to see if I could. Might not have an overall effect, but at least I could be certain that things could change.
Would I be a bad person if I say I really hope that Alice will help the minotaurs in the future?
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Are you doing any more chapters this year?
I wish I didn't have to wait until next December to see happens next after the next chapter because it's starting to get good.
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That's something Opaline would've thought of that idea.
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I'm going to miss this story for a while.
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Why's that?
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Because this is the last chapter until December as I understand it.
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Oh, okay then.
Hmm; I would have thought that Alice would have gained a fetish for this stuff from Chapter 4 maybe, slowly growing more into the idea, but this is going in an interesting direction.