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Melesse Lindenya

Elen síla lúmenn' omentielvo. Estaxen yando Undómë Tinwë.

Melesse Lindenya Joined 22nd Aug, 2016 · Offline

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Turbotune
Turbotune #1 · Feb 25th, 2023 · · ·
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That was still quite emotional, and very thought-provoking. Proves that this incest ship has so much natural drama potential.
Also……not to be a nerd, but……

The observer Sweetie could take any more of this, couldn't stand the feeling of pleasure as her hoof stroked her own nethers at the sight of her beloved sister being eaten out, and for the first time that day, she terminated the spell herself, a desperate burst of magic from her soul that sought out the faster route of escape.

I think the "could" in that first sentence should be "couldn't" or it wouldn't make sense.
Thanks for the emotional trip!

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