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Omegathyst


Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)

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Despite all the strides in friendship made between species, Twilight never reached out to the zebras the same way, leaving them in the shadows with their only zebra isolated from the others. Upon an accidental slipup during a royal address about said zebra, Twilight and her nation pay a very heavy price.

Contains strong themes of racism, lots of Zebrican rhymes, very slight mentions and details of maiming, and a very hopeful/hopeless ending for the fate of Equestria. Participating entry in the EPNW Iron Author Contest 😊

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Very good fic! Very sad and moving. I wish that the obvious zebra racism in the show had been addressed at all. :(

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Yeah Celestia too often let them off the hook when they did stupid stuff.

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And look how that turn out. :ajbemused:

Their kingdom has dishonorably fallen, and got sent back to the "Three Pony Tribes Era" in the frickin future of G5!? :facehoof:

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Yeah still not sure exactly how that happened considering even some of the worst villains back then couldn't pull it off in the end considering friendship won and saved the day.

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This is what happens when one spoils children.

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Maybe. Considering from the YouTube videos on the comics twilight and friends got rid because the mystery alicorn started the rumor mill up by being a snob which makes no sense Considering how many snobs were in Canterlot one more shouldn't make a huge difference.

"This is Condor-Actual to Overlord, I have eyes on the ground, and I can confirm, it's gone to shit."

"Affirmative, this was to be expected. But this doesn't mean we have failed. Return to base.

We have a plan for this specific occassion..."

Interesting take on the fall of G4 nation. I wondered if it had anything to do with the fact that Twi apparently took ALL magic and hid it in order to keep it away from the new villain. It did not specify pony-magic, but ALL magic. That would be another reason for any hostility towards ponies from many sources I bet.

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