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Stoked to see you’re back to writing here again.
You’ve got such a knack for finding a balance between the oftentimes dark and depraved sex acts, and the light, almost soft, tender character moments.
Really hyped to check this out
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Damn, I’m dumb as hell.
I thought your last fic was written in 2020 for some reason, and that this was some sort of monumental return. My bad.
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Nah it's been like two months :P
But it's good to be back?!
i haven't not been writing, just been doing Deltarune stuff.
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Thanks for not making it weird, and uh… welcome back.
It’s probably not the right forum to mention this, but I wanted to say I thought But They Were Both Bottoms was the absolute tits.
Also your take on Rarity in your stories is my personal favourite take on her from anyone on here.
This was a pretty well-written story overall. Good setup, good structure, good choreography, and a satisfying payoff. One complaint I might have would be the lack of detail in descriptions throughout. The pacing felt a little bit fast, and I think it really could have benefited if you had taken things a little bit slower and been more specific about things like the characters undressing and Suri's ministrations. The dialogue could have done with a little more spice as well. It was good in certain places, but in many other places, it was a bit utilitarian.