• Member Since 28th Feb, 2022
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Sleepy_meep_92


//hello viewer, here is some random account//just another pegasisiter ^^//stories/updates randomly//

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Luna wants to learn what ponies these days do.
Maybe someone who knows them will help.
It can't be that hard .
Right?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 2 )

This was a cute litte story, although it was a bit bogged down by mechanical errors and very odd phrasing that was a bit distracting. While the hijinx were funny, I wish there had been a bit more detail to really milk this premise of every laugh it could get. As it is, it feels a bit scant and rushed.

yeah i understand that T^T .
after the first like 400 words I had no idea what else to add :/
And this really was simply a one-shot :applejackconfused:
If this better explains.

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