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MistyShadowz


If Friendship is Magic, Imagine what Love could be!

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After hearing of Rainbow and Rarity's relationship, Twilight has some questions. She wants said questions answered by the best source possible, hence she goes to Rarity about the matter.

Sitting down at a dinner, Twilight asks these very important questions, that every friend should ask at one point. One she needed an answer for was; what comes next?


Rated T for mild mention of sex and intoxication. Sex is implied, but it is never explicitly mentioned/done on screen!

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I actually enjoyed this. While it is not all my cup of tea, I love the descriptions, the context provided, and the dialogue. I loved the questions and I loved how Rarity spoke. She seems very frank yet elegant. And that elegance comes with actual substance.

Short and sweet. Rarity's characterization is spot on, and I loved how you manged to convey her feelings for Rainbow mostly through dialog. Like you said, RariDash isn't the most popular ship, but you made it work well. Come to think about it, there are like two episodes with the two of them as the main focus, out of over two hundred. I guess the writers thought they already had the tomboy and girly-girl shtick with Applejack.
Sorry, rambling. Great story!

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Happy I got Rarity in character. She always scares me while writing, what with her being my least favourite an' all.
And yea, RariDash isn't very popular, nor does it have very many episodes to go by. I went off of their relationship in stories about them breaking up or splitting paths - take that information as you will.
Glad you enjoyed, bud:twilightsmile:

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Thank you for the kind words, bud. And happy you enjoyed, especially if this isn't your cup of tea.:twilightsmile:

This story is very well written for being done in an hour Misty! For editing suggestions, I noticed Twilight got a bit repetitive with the 'huh's at the beginning, in case that might be something you'd want to tweak:twilightsheepish:

It's a nice read, and I particularly like how Rarity verbalizes her relationship with Rainbow. I've seen many fans interpret the raridash ship in this manner (myself included) and it's a complexity that is difficult to explain. Raritys words were well-put and very sweet. The twijack mention is also appreciated. Good stuff all around!

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Thanks!
Rarity verbalising this wasn't, at first, my intention. I sort of wanted to go back and forth between flashbacks for each question, but considering how much I was willing to write at that moment in time, this is what we got in the end, I suppose.
Anywho! Thanks a bushel for readin', bud!

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