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saw this posted and placed it on my fav/following list before i even dived into reading it.
it did not dissappoint
Aw yeah! The sexy shenanigans those two are going to get up to!
Ooh! New story 😁 awesome
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Thank you. Enjoy the show.
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Oh the things you can do with haaaands.
Heh, this'll be fun.
I'm curious to know just what kind of outfits our lovely captains will end up having. Something military-related, perhaps?
Let the otherworldly shenanigans begin!
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I have a sketch what Tempest and Gauge will look like as humans. Just haven't finished coloring it yet.
https://www.deviantart.com/masterdarhil/art/Tempestgauge-Sketch-901212442
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Well they still look like bodyguards. If they still want body armour, I'm sure the future has something lighter than kevlar nowadays.
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I thought about that but no, just dress uniforms. Remember, the mirror doesn't translate everything exactly across or else Twilight and Sunset would have both first come through naked.
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True, but I was more referring to after they came through the portal, though I doubt that would be a necessary investment. I mean, Sunset knows the place like the back of her hand despite it being 2.5 years, and the two princesses would be just regular people. But the captains would be protective, 'cause, y'know, duty calls.
didn't they joke about AI going skynet earlier? lol you think people will learn to treat AI better
Well, looks like Sunset is about to make Raven's Discord Day desire close to a reality. I mean, it's a synthetic body rather than an organic one, but, come the next Discord Day, that can be remedied (if everything works out).
Why do I have the feeling Sunset is going to use every opportunity to just stun the other members of her party (other than Raven).
Beret.
Unless you wanted a hair clip rather than a hat.
A whole hour away. What could go wrong!?
Also, I hope when the robot goes through the portal it goes pony.
Some painful memories, some fun new toys, and the possibility of an ambulatory form for Raven.
Tempest and Gauge probably should chill though. If they want to keep a low profile at least.
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You think people would wear a damn mask to stop coughing on others too sooooo...
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Sunset Shimmer: mostly reformed, but keeping others guessing is half the fun!
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Damn auto correct, thanks.
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Cities couldn't possibly have traffic on a Friday.
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Fun to come and yes, they should.
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Of course.
And I see Twilight coincidentally picked somepony with the unicorn prodigy naming convention.
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You think it would be easy to name talking pastel ponies, but in honesty I have struggled with some of them. Does the name define the individual or is it like being resigned to a fate because of the name?
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At least in this case it's consistent with what Hasbro/DHX did.
And with Sunset's student, you could say she's no better than her mother, even though, technically, nopony knew Sunset was related to Celestia, even Sunset herself.
I hope Raven doesn't go crazy with its new body.
Oh man I'm so looking forward to seeing Sunset propose to Twilight
I am looking forward to that
Ok, that got a laugh from me. Of course, she was gonna name it after her favorite doll.
And oof, hearing what authors come up with regarding Sunset's first arrival to Earth tends to be heart-wrenching and this is no different
(that's twice in a week now...)
'Smartypants' - Does bring back memories, though I do wonder if Drake Spike is still around (sleeping maybe?) and how big he might be (if Torch-sized, it would be reasonable to NOT see him around Canterlot) ...
I guess it says something about me that I'm just waiting for things to go sideways.
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Spike appeared in chapter 1. If you read God's and Monsters you'll see that Spike lives in the Castle of Friendship in Ponyville, but is Equestria's top diplomat so he comes to Canterlot often.
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It's not a story until things go sideways.
I want to see Raven have fun in her new body. I also want to see how Twilight's PAAL will be like and how it'll function crossing the mirror into Equestria and dealing with a world where magic is real.
Oh my...
Appreciate the warning.
I bet explaining the differences between humans and ponies must've be fun. Gauge just discovered the joy of "morning wood", something Sunset, having raised girls, wouldn't've had to explain.
Good Gaia, Sunset is thirsty. Luckily she's got herself a delicious glass of lavender and sage-blossom tea waiting for her.
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Indeed!
If you are in a loyal relationship it was 100% wrong. If you have an open relationship have at it.
Isabella: I have been replaced!
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No one wants to see an offended griffon.
what the heck Sunset, even Aria had time to visit her grandson in the retiring home.
i am so looking forward to seeing what Sunsets fingers can do, but more importantly her proposal
Honestly, the way you describe the Gilmore Tower, I couldn't help but think of my experiences at the CN Tower in Toronto. Seriously, you want tall, that is tall, and the 360 rotating Restaurant there is amazing.
I would not be surprised if the place was initially entrepreneured by a human Discord.
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I have no idea.
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*wicked grin*
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I did eat at a rotating restaurant in Montreal once. That was an interesting experience.
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Lol, never leave anything on the ledge by the windows, and have fun finding the washroom (and getting back). The view was great though! Did more than a full rotation by the time dinner was done.
This is Sunset we're talking about here. Chances are that would be a calm night out for her.
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That's why we have designated drivers and cabs. Hehe!
This story is great! I am very much enjoying this AU you have crafted.
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Thank you. Love the B5 icon btw.
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Ah, a fellow fan. Always nice to see.
Looking forward to the next chapter my good author.
This story was a fun one to read.
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It's not over yet. *wink*
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I know. I should have said a fun chapter to read.
awesome chapter, i kinda expected tempest to start a fight with some random female patron who may have came onto Gauge a bit too strong
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You can guarantee she would have told them to go fish elsewhere. However, unnecessary, Gauge had one or more beautiful ladies already hanging off of him the entire time.
The crowd just thought that the transformation was some special effects... Hopefully no one else was watching.
Because we know SciTwi was able to detect and track magic.
Interesting how Sunset and Twilight got their horns back but Tempest didn't.
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This is a personal touch for me. I've always felt the unicorns in Equestria Girls should have had horns. But I'm slightly bowing to the canon here by not giving Tempest hers. Now alicorns, who are supposed to be far more powerful should have bigger wings AND bigger horns. Also, SciTwi should not have had wings if they were only going to have her be a unicorn in Equestria, but again, personal opinion on that one.