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tailsopony


Awkward.

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Like a glitch in the matrix that would be terrifying

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The original idea was a comedy based on the "totally not robots" subreddit. Then I read one too many unedited seemingly 0 effort stories. No grammar, no punctuation, below the minimum word count, and "lol random". This was my, decidedly low effort, take on this. I didn't even manage that right. I only saw four typos when I just re-read it right now. Not nearly enough to make this comparably proper satire. I need to edit it to make it shittier. Like, what does that even mean?

1/10, 0/10 with rice.

It’s been a while since I’ve seen a shitfic on purpose. Despite it’s intent, the concept of the same species from different dimensions interacting with each other with disastrous results would be an interesting read due to the amount of deconstruction fuel the writer could get mileage out of.

I love this! Also, I think that it should be marked as complete.

And I found it kind of funny how he kept repeating: I am a normal pony.

what a nice normal pony.

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I mean, the original idea wasn't bad. I just ruined it, like taking a log of poop and smearing it all over a good book.

11108274
I know. It's traumatically poorly done. Luckily, it's only 1k words.

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Marking it complete would improve it. That's out.

11108999
Perfectly normal.

I'm tempted to write a followup, but make it worse. Also, rereading it again, there are a few more errors. Few. Was worried there, but I think the first time I re-read it I was too disgusted with myself to properly look it over.

Good to see some normal porn for normal people.

“Greetings... Twilight… Sparkle. I am… a normal pony.”

Twilight blinked. “A… normal pony?”

“Yes… A NORMAL PONY.”

Twilight doubted that, very strongly. Still, it was best to be polite. “I see… Well, umm, do you have a name?”

“YES. I am…

THRACKERZOD!

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OMFG. It totally is Trackerzod's voice/lines and I didn't even realize it. Oof. What a terrible way to do a character reference...

Got a few laughs, nice

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