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Graymane Shadow


“It’s terribly dangerous for an artist to fulfill other peoples’ expectations. They produce their worst work when they do that.” - David Bowie

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Princess Luna is in Ponyville once more for Nightmare Night.

Somepony else is not.

It's a problem Luna wishes she could solve.


An entry for Imposing Sovereigns III.

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Comments ( 4 )

What mere monster of the Everfree could have brought TWILIGHT SPARKLE to this state? And how could Luna have left her for dead?

In their own way, all the alicorns have determination. Nice story.

This feels like the last chapter of a longer tale. It could use a bit more background to set the scene for Twilight setting out and failing to return, and the following vigil and eventual acceptance of her death. Still, what's there is a good snapshot of Luna working her way through the mourning process, and the interruptions thereof by everypony she comes across.

Still, one thing bothers me: How the heck do quadrupeds do the Limbo? :rainbowhuh:

But seriously, thank you for this and best of luck in the judging.

Twilight Sparkle was dead, and there was nothing Luna could do about it.

Well that escalated quickly!


Ok so if Twilight is still alive then why is there a death tag? Also will there be a sequel?

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