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A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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Sunset Shimmer comes home and finds herself on her living room couch. But how can she know for sure that's really herself?

"Time travel?" Sunset Shimmer echoed the words spoken a moment ago by the beautiful, leather-clad redhead sitting in front of her. "THAT'S what I'm supposed to assume?"

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This felt like a low-key chill sitcom episode. Until you know what... Amusing. :rainbowlaugh:

Congratulations on 100 stories here! (And three entries in the contest) :derpyderp1:.

"You don't know, because we don't care about that.

An important point!

"Well...I guess that makes sense."

Indeed.

i am honored that this is what you chose to be your 100th story for the site. congratulations!

Great story by far the best story in the competition when it comes to comedy.

Freaking loved it

I must admit it: I did not see that coming, either.

"I'll have whatever you're having. Since I already know I like it."

Gold.

"Well, sure. My human self is in the Dragon World, where she flies and breathes fire and is way too cool to ever want to come back HERE.

aww glad that human Sunset is living her best self

"Magic clones are kind of dumb, so they always make lots of stupid mistakes. If I'm a magic clone, you'll know pretty soon, one way or another."

wow very rude to the log clone Twilight who was in fact extremely not-dumb

"When was Haymerica discovered?"

"1492, by Christopher Coltlumbus. Unless you're looking for Eric the Roan, which was...around 1000, I guess? He discovered Caneighda, and MAYBE the state of Mane. And before him, the Native Haymericans."

terrible, awful puns, i love them

The intruder smiled knowingly. "I know about that one spot on your thigh, where...you know." She grinned devlishly. "Would a changeling know about that?"

well we got to get to the self-shipping somehow

"What do you MEAN Equestria girls are all crazy? Fine, DO date girls from Crystal Prep instead. Date Principal Cinch for all I care.

now that's a ship!

Sunset admitted, "I GUESS you're not a changeling? Also, Flash told me he's finally figured out his type. He mostly likes girls who are evil. That one time he had a crush on Princess Twilight was because of a misunderstanding."

or... is it...

Sunset struggled out of her double's arms. "This is so sudden! I'm not used to having another me trying to...whatever it is you're trying to do! Can't you let me get used to you first?"

the gap between the two Sunsets here makes it more suspicious that this is a Sunset from the recent future

"I'm a changeling queen from another timeline, who changed myself into the disguised demon clone of the future version of the original human Sunset Shimmer!"

well she has a point in that i would not have thought of this

Flash sighed. "When she climbed into bed with me, we HELD HANDS. Do you know what that's like?"

can't believe Flash would speak of such lewdness so brazenly

Flash flashed her a grin. "Anything to help rescue you from an evil changeling duplicate of an alternate universe robot queen, Sunny!"

"Robot?"

"Ah think we can tell you that part when we've all had some coffee, sugar."

heh, good beat to end it with

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Thank you for your kind comment...but maybe you could put a note partway through it saying "SPOILERS BELOW THIS POINT?"

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