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Foxhelm


Found the show in late 2015, and fell in love with it. I also like D&D (3 and 3.5), Fansty novel and movie, Sci-Fi movies. MarbleMac is Best Ship and Flashlight is a fair second

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This story is a sequel to My Little Mages: The Revenge of Nightmare Moon


Many are the slices of life stories of Twilight, her friends and their families. Presented here are three, each of one of the Cutie Mage Crusaders (CMC) and their experiences with Princess Luna as the Princess of Dreams helped each.

A My Little Mages retelling of Sleepless in Ponyville, For Whom the Sweetie Belle Toils and Bloom and Gloom, collectively The CMC Dream Trilogy and more of a prequel to My Little Mages: The Phantasm of Philanthropy.

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Comments ( 10 )

Rainbow seemed to be utterly oblivious to the girl’s state, "Glad you're rested up, because we've got a long trek ahead. Totally gonna be worth it when we get to Winsome Falls." As she spoke she exited the tent taking her bedroll with her.

“Yeah, tah Innocence Falls.” Apple Bloom answered. “AJ said this trip would have been Pa and mah if Pa was here, but Ah think Ah can get her tah invite RD.'' Scootaloo raised her head as an open-mouth smile formed on her face. “Ain’t gonna makah any promisahs, Scoots, AJ’s a bit persinkady about family traditions.”

You used different names to refer to the falls.

Not bad. It's a pretty good take, a much more overtly emotional take.

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You used different names to refer to the falls.

:facehoof: that was an error, it's met to be Innocence Falls

Hey so I was wondering if you were going to do the new generation in the my little mages world

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Let's just say that's a sucker's bet.

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Thanks... so about the attempts to provide more connective tissue between Sweetie's fifth birthday party and the rest of the story?

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They didn't really add much to the story, so I guess I barely even noticed. Sorry.

Okay, I see you made some key changes, ones that required a little more reasoning on Apple Bloom's part. Having Babs also be plagued with nightmares is also a nice touch.

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