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Owlor


Swedish guy with too much imagination. Draws comics as a hobby and writes as a diversion.

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[One-shot] When you're a performer, you reach out to hundreds, if not thousands of ponies every day. A really good performance, or even just an entertainingly bad one, can reshape a pony's life. Abigail Jacqueline, sometimes nicknamed Orangejack, formerly Applejack goes to a magic show performed by the Midwintersday sisters, a quartet of Trixie's doppelgängers.

Based on an aternative universe from the Pony POV series by Alex Warlorn.

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Okay, this one gonna need a bit of background. I've been doing the artwork for this radio drama based on the pony POV series by Alex Warlorn. I am also doing the artwork for an episode later down the line that features Trixie's sisters from the same fanfic, and for that one I drew an image of the sister in sillouette, but forgot the horns, so I had to scrap the image.

Long story short, ep 4 got delayed quite a fair bit and the director of the project had to put it together as quickly as he could, and as such he digged that image up from god knows where (I don't even remember uploading it anywhere, so where he got it from is a mystery to me.) and put it in the place in the story where an alternative reality Applejack (It's THAT sort of fanfic) goes with uncle and aunt Orange to catch a show.

As a result, at least in the audio adaption-verse, the alternative reality where AJ actually stat with aunt Orange is now populated by a mysterious group of earth-ponies that all look mysteriously like Trixie, and while I joked around about that with the director by email, I wrote this little thing to flesh out the characters.

zel

Should it not be "doppelgänger"? :rainbowhuh:

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Indeed it should, :facehoof: thanks for the correction. :pinkiehappy:

I'm not that good a critiking fics, but I would like to say good job, though it could use a bit more work. I will stick around to see where this goes.

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Uhm.... nowhere? :rainbowhuh: It's a one-shot, it's not getting any longer. :rainbowlaugh:

zel

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It's a one-shot

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It's a one-shot
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It's a one-shot
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It's a one-shot

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It's a one-shot


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It's a one-shot



Wait, what???

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:rainbowderp: Well, yeah, I didn't expect anyone to be interested enough in something as esoteric as the Alternative Universe version of a couple of original characters from another fanfic for more than a brief one-shot. :twilightblush:

I couldn't take my eyes off them! I was in a room with four Trixies! Okay, I had only had this nightmare once or twice before. The first being when my friends and I had that 'blind taste cook off' and I was very sure what I got was Rainbow Dash's cooking. Maybe the pegasus would wake me up soon.

"Sound off!" Declared Nyxie holding her hooves up like Pinkie at the climax of her 'Evil Enchantress' song. The others assumed equally Super-Pony-Rangers-esque poses. I could tell they were a few years apart in age, but I still found myself befuddled.
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"In attendance!" Shouted Nyxie as if calling out to an audience. "The MidSummer-Night Sisters!"

Surely I didn't leave THAT many loose threads? :rainbowhuh:

zel

1234927 Uhh...
Of course...
Everything got explained alright.dl.dropbox.com/u/93510029/spike.png

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What's there to explain? :rainbowderp: They get up on stage, they perform a show, they argue behind the stage for a while, hen they move on, that's the story. Yeah, it's kinda low-key, but what's wrong with that? :rainbowhuh:

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Okay, I've tried to provide enough paratext to explain the context of this story, but here goes. This takes place in an alternative universe where Applejack never saw the Sonic Rainboom and went on to stay with her aunt and uncle Orange, ony it's told from the perspective of a group of stage ponies that perform illusionism, that is, a magic show, but without using any form of unicorn magic, relying instead on sleight-of-hoof and just in general the same kind of techniques a normal stage magician would use. :trixieshiftright:

The reason for this rather odd choice of setting and characters is because I'm one of the sequential artists for the audio adaption of reharmonized ponies, I drew the art for this ep (which is why the art sucks. :twilightblush:) However, the director took one of my unfinished drawings I did for another ep, the one with Trixie's sisters and put it in this one to fill out a small gap where Orangejack goes to see an early morning show with her aunt and uncle.

And as such, as far as the audio-adaption-verse goes, there's four doppelgängers of Trixie and her sisters running around in one of the pararell universes, and I found that amusing enough that I just had to flesh out the characters a bit and here we are. It is a fix-fic for the audio adaption of another fanfic, easy as pie. :ajsmug: Okay, that IS kind of an odd origin for a fanfic, but I DID do the best I could to explain the premise of the fic itself in the description, and the origin behind it in a comment attached to it, but if there's anything else that confuses you, let me know and I'll try to explain :twilightsheepish:

zel

1234963 Soon we will end with more lore than the whole fanfic's lengthdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png

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Have you seen my Pony POV Series? Good luck with that.

*Grins* Very cute fic but the explanation might fit better asa preface rather than an addendum. Still enjoyed it though was mildly baffled.:pinkiesmile:

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That's a good idea, I tend to try and avoid authors notes, since they feel a bit self-indulgent to me and instead I put the explanation in the comments since I figured that if peopel are confused, they are gonna look there anyway, but for this one, I prolly need to explain the premise in the body of the fic itself, or elseits utterly incomprehensible. :twilightblush:

1881068 Don't think of them as self indulgent. I personally really enjoy them. I personally love getting more insight into the writer's thought process and ideas. As well when it's something like this to help explain the story I think it's maybe even necessary.

Like I said though I don't think it was really needed. Even not knowing totally what was going on I still really enjoyed the fic.

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