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Kitsune_Kenshi


A Kitsune swordman wondering around Equestrian and beyond, having much tales to tell...

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thisissocooliloveitmakemoreofiticantwaitthereisgoodcomedyanditseemstohaveagreatpotentialmakemoreneverstopyourecoolfuckwhoeversaysyourenot

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Intersecting! I trie duo make this as fun as possible to read. In the future chapters you might encounter some memes or bad jokes. ;)

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im all about those bad jokes and memes lmao

awesome chapter mate cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Whoo Everypony!!! More likes! MORE FUCKING LIIIIIIIKES!!!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

This is either gonna be Cringe as hell or Bloody fantastic can't wait to see which

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Hey eddie can ask about the harem? I know the female kurama will join but who else?

You have now got my interest. And despite being not being a expert or a huge fan to Naruto. ( I'm more into Dragon Ball Series or Jojo.). I still know things like Chakra, and the Eyes.

Might need to do a little editing. Other than that it's not bad.

so when will he tell them that he is a human in spikes body? they do need to know the truth at some point:rainbowlaugh:

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Sure, as for the harem... No spoilers! ;)

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Oh boy, that will be something. :twilightoops:

Plus, they'll be sad that the Real Spike died.

Wait eddie i remember something why you didnt make this an anthro? just asking

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Well not to be rude but I'm not really into anthros, because that's just... Strange and awkward to me...

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Oh. :applejackunsure:

But having a Harem of Normal Ponies is a little weird too. Then again, he is a "Baby" Dragon, but that kinda makes it worse. Unless he somehow grows up?

"Anyway, as I was saying, the old Spike died and you took over, so act like him while find some excuse with your Naruto powers; make sure to be a good one, once you're discovered your real ID then I, WILL KILL YOU; trust me when I say that..." Joemath's tone changed to an icy chilling tone as he mentioned the word 'kill', "Since you're my first guest from Earth 999999, I must perform a small test on you to see if you can handle this situation; also that you'll get a VIP for this."

Wait? What the f*** was that supposed? You mean that the Mane Six aren't supposed to learn his true identity of a former human or something?! Why is Joemath so pissed about that?

I'll give you missions throughout your journey in Equestria, it'll give you credits, and I have this dimensional store in your subconscious that allows you to purchase many other skills from other anime or universe. But no infinity gauntlet, fuck not, hell not, don't even think about that. Joemath said, which surprised Spike again.

I think your supposed to mean F*** no, and Hell no?

"Infinity Gauntlet?"

How do you not know it? It's from Marvel.

Here you go: Dimensional Mission 1: Escort Smolder and Ocellus to safety to their destination; because Chrysalis's assassins will be on the way to kill them. Prize after completing the mission: become love interests of both Ocellus and Smolder + unlocking Female Kurama . Mission Failure consequence: DEATH.

Okay, that Mission Failure is SUPER Extreme! Why?

this is cringe but i feel cringe not reading it.
also good update time!
make more we believe in you

Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor

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Joemath is pissed because he was once betrayed by another dude who spoiled his true ID and Joemath's existence. And as the guardian of dimensions, telling others about his existence would unbalance the timeline or even destroy a dimension. After killing that traitor, Joemath nearly lost hope, but after witnessing Rogers's kind heart, he decided to give them another chance. Therefore, if a displaced spoiled the existence of the god of dimension, something really really bad could happen.

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He know what a infinity gauntlet is, just not expecting it cuz he ordered Naruto.

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EXCUSE ME SIR ARE YOU AKSING ME WHY THE CONSEQUENCE IS SO EXTREME?! IF TWO OF THE YOUNG SIX DIES, IT WOULD RUIN THE NEW ELEMENTS OF HARMONY, WHICH CAN CUASE DISORDER, CHAOS, AND EVEN UNBALANCE IN THE DIMENSION THEY'RE IN...

Sorry, not trying to be rude but it seemed obvious to me...

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Okay.

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Okay. Keeping Joemath a Secret is a very good idea. But, the Guy still wouldn't reveal he was once Human, and the Real Spike died, right?

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Hey its okay if you weird by anthro its okay man

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Obrigado cara, sim vai continuar. A propósito, pode me dizer de qual parte da história você mais gostou?

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Yes, as for the fact that he is actually a human and that the original Spike died will be kept in secret for the rest of his life, which by the way is nearly forever due to Joemath’s help. ;)

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Okay. It's just I fear that Twilight and her Friends could be suspicious on Spike's rather "strange behaviour", and "different" personality, and being OOC sometimes ( Which is our Human of course.). And would it be weird that Spike suddenly got OP Powers like the Eyes, Multiple Justu's, and even befriend a Giant Sexy Fox Chick, and possibly other Girls ( From the Animes that he had choose) .

And him just suddenly like having a Harem might raise some flags to his Friends and Family. Just saying. 🤷


Although, he could make a "excuse" that the head injury did more damage and cause him to have a different attitude/personality, and be "mature".

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Yeah, yeah, that could happen, I mean hitting hard on the head can be a good excuse, as for how he got those power, Spike/Rogers can say that when he hit his head he faced a near-death situation which he fought hard against it, resulting in him unlocking his 'full potential', which is also how he 'gets' his new powers from; how's that?

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That good excuse except pinkie can guess anything and it be right sometimed its not so we get 50/50 pinkie gonna tell the truth or not

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Yeah. Like Human Pinkie Pie KNOW about Princess Twilight's and Spike's Identity in Equestria Girls 1 before they say anything. I think the Author should deal with that.

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Good Point. But as for the Harem thing. That might surprise them that Spike has just suddenly got bold with that. Not that I'm against it. I love Harems!

It's just I fear that they might think that this Spike feels like a "Different Dragon" with New Tastes like Harems/Cursing, as well with the OP Powers AFTER the accident.

You get what I'm saying?

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Eu gostei da parte que em que o protagonista uso os jutsus médicos para a reação da twilight.

Needs a touch of edits and proof reading. Overall a good concept.

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Yeah I understood what you're trying to say, Pinkie will randomly pop up Spike's guess which of course, scares the shit outta him. LOL

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It's not that funny if you think about it, you said it yourself that Joemath have said of the Consequences are Heavily Severe!

Maybe he should ask Joemath to STOP Pinkie Pie from Spoiling everything. I mean, it's NOT his fault that Pinkie Pie somehow have Fourth Wall Break Powers and then knows about his Former Human Identity, knowing Naruto OP Powers ( Other Anime Powers and Girls), and finally knowing that the Real Spike died! :pinkiesad2:

I think Joemath should do something about it, before Pinkie Pie SPOILERS everything, before the Adventure has started. And then she'll accidentally destroyed the MLP Universe/Dimension for knowing too much and pissing Joemath off.

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Spike could ask Joemath to wipe out her fourth wall breaking power, but that means our favorite party pony will never be her old self. So Joemath can either seal away her power of knowing too much stuff WHILE keeping her random without spoiling his ID

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Maybe. It's just that since Joemath have said that IF the Ponies will learn about the Human's Identify, Anime Powers, and that the Real Spike has Died. It would have Severe Consequences of the MLP Universe/Dimension being in danger.

But the twist of it all? Is that our Former Human/Spike 2.0 didn't tell them of course. But instead, they did on their own ( Basically Pinkie Pie figure it out on her own, or Twilight using Smarts of seeing Spike "Weird/Strange" Behavior and Different Personality, or even Rarity with her Detective Skills).


Basically, all I saying is that our Human/Spike 2.0 Protagonist, and even Joemath didn't have the foresight of the Ponies being Smart enough ( Or Wacky like Pinkie Pie or even Discord) figuring out the truth on their own.

Or have underestimated them that the Ponies can't figure it out, because those two thought they were ignorant to know the Multiverse Theory or think outside the box.

1. Like having Pinkie Pie's Randomness, and Fourth Wall Breaks and Knowledge. 2. Twilight's Brain Smarts to think outside the box, or see some small details. Like exposing Chrysalis disguise In the Infamous Canterlot Wedding for example.

3. And Rarity does have Detective Skills to see that Spike 2.0 is kinda not acting like the Original Spike? 4. Heck, What If Discord learn about it on his own as well? I mean, Discord and Spike are "Dungeon's and Dragon's" Buddies. And learning the truth will devastate him.


You see why I'm concerned?

But, like you said. You made a smart idea to have Joemath to use his God Powers to Block or Nerf Pinkie Pie's Fourth Wall Breaking/Knowledge Powers, without messing with her unique Character. And maybe have Discord to not spoil anything as well with his Chaos Powers, and his own Fourth Wall Breaking/Knowledge Powers) .

And maybe have Joemath help Spike 2.0 to don't act Too OOC ( Out Of Character) that Twilight or Rarity will notice it.


P.S. I forget about Applejack. Because I have seen some other stories that she can detect Lies/White Lies from the Displaced or something? Like a Living Lie Detector or like Toph from Avatar: TLA Series. So, maybe have Joemath keep Applejack from looking though Spike 2.0's White Lies as well?

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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In a way, yes. Spike could make up an excuse by saying that he used too much power defending Smolder and Ocellus that it unlocked his growth.

"So, Spike," Smolder started, "don't you think its a bit... Well, *taste* of your time to 'escort' us to a regular science project, I mean, its not like our first time in the Everfree Forest."

Waste.

"Ugh, I like harem anime and sexy girls doesn't mean I am a pervert, I mean I haven't even peeked through a female changing room!" Spike rolled his eyes and responded mentally.

True.

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