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Jhoira


Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!

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Pinkie Pie reads the letter given to her by the first mare who ever loved her. It's a good bye letter, Pinkie Pie will never see her again. Though, thankfully, that's not the end of the story.

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Comments ( 11 )

Loved the story, minor nitpick though

not an legs length from me

It's supposed to be "a"

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Hehe, yeah I originally wrote "an arms" then corrected myself, then didn't fix the an :D

Want sure what the turn would be. It was a good one. It would make sense but at the same time it doesn't fit. I don't know, I'm sure there's theories about the subject.

The letter was a tad confusing at first and had to read it twice then it made sense to me. It was a very touching story as a whole.

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Hehe, yeah it was one of those things where the author is purposely trying to less your assumptions down the wrong path :D

Sad, but strangely cute at the same time. I liked it.

holy crap

right in the FEELS!

dang this was so good.

so good

Aww, sweet and sad aiming for the feels. Makes me think of Plum's "In My Arms" which is not a bad feeling to have.

Wow! I didn't think it would be Pinkie's mom. So sad....and yet, so cute. I loved it!

Damn, you even do wholesome sad well.

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