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Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!

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This story is a sequel to Losing Her Marbles


Marble Pie meets and spends some time with the talkative Autumn Blaze, only to find out that there's a lot more to the fast-talking kirin than meets the eye. Though she knows that she can't do anything about it she makes the mistake of giving her crush the lead and letting it string her along.


Written for: May Pairing Contest

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 34 )
Ri2

Woo boy. May have made a mistake here, Marble.

okay some more context may be needed here.

While Marble will probably be thrilled about this, I kind of wonder how Autumn Blaze is going to react to the news. I mean the idea of a magical stone that declares she and Marble are to be together.

9654544
I had to look it up, because I had forgotten about it too. The Pairing Stone is referred to in a single line in the show. In the episode "Hearthbreakers" Pinkie's mom (Cloudy Quartz) says that she and her husband "were chosen by the Pairing Stone and betrothed within a fortnight."

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9655017
Yep! I remember useless facts too well and can include them in stories because I'm a crazy person! :D


9654588
That is a good question!

dang it i want more

9655422
Heh, this story has become strangely popular.

Wonder if Marble will follow her or if Blaze would like to stay.

9655796
That is also a good question.

9655569
well you did kinda leave it on a cliff hanger which usually causes people to have questions about media that have been left on cliff hangers. which in turn makes them want more. and considering how well written this fic is don't expect it to go down any time soon.

9655990
Is that a challenge!? *Deletes it!* Hm... Maybe I shouldn't take everything as a challenge...

And true, there are some nuance questions that aren't answered. I mean I knew it was a tiny bit of a cliffhanger but now that I think about it I suppose it was more of one than I thought at first.

9656041
i promise it's not a challenge just a statement

9656047
Well, I wasn't really planning on it but I could write a sequel.

9656069
if you do thank you if you don't well thank you for a good story any way

9656084
I do really like Autumn Blaze. And I am writing way, way, way too much... :D

9656091
is it she is a slightly more energetic and talkative version of pinkie pie?

9656096
She has a lot of depth to her too!

9656099
that is true despite her only one appearance and if you like her that much then write about her as much as you want

9656109
Hehe, well if you're like me and overanalyze the crap out of stuff you get a lot from her very short appearance.

9657030
Well, I made a prequel.

9657925
Sequel please? This is to cute to not want one.

Also, a very interesting pairing.

9694640
Once I'm not so sick and writing more it’ll show up.

You should listen to Darren Strubblo the comedian. He has one on introverts and extroverts.
Etrovert : what was I saying?
Introvert: everything! And my brain blew up.

9655569
It's because it's strange. A nice kind of strange. A new kind of idea. There are plenty of Rainbow X Soarin so those are not as popular, but a Rainbow X Sombra will be popular because it's a new idea.

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It also helps that Autumn Blaze is awesome!

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That to.
Top three crazy MLP characters.
1. Autumn Blaze
2. Princess Sea Spray
3. Pinkie Pie
Do you think that anypony could be crazier than Pinkie if they didn't get out often?

9780944
There's always a crazier pony.

Excellent fic. Good to see there’s more Marble ship fics out there (my own trilogy included). Hope I get to see more of them.

9877422
I’m working on a sequel to “someone you can trust” so you will.

They are so sweet together! I'm loving this.

You nailed Marble and Autumn's characters perfectly!

I never would of thought of this pairing but holy hell do I love it and I want more of it!

Dear Celestia I loved this and hate the fact it ended so abruptly without getting to see more of Autumn and Marble together. But overall well done! It made me crave more interaction between the two mares and caused me to power through each chapter enjoying the interaction of very opposite characters that blended so nicely. This is definitely a new ship for me!

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