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Jhoira


Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!

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Rarity is acting odd and Twilight can't figure out why. She gets help from a very special book.


Made after I found out about Raritwi Bomb Week. I thought it was a cute little idea! I encourage everyone to write for it too!

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Ok. Way too much fun and very cute. Characters were... Perfect.

All is fair in love and war. If you have access to an alternate dimensional version of your friend, I absolutely approve of reaching out to them to figure out your friend.

Nice fic, good use of the book to bypass a personal blind spot, hehe.

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Yay!

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Wish I had such a cheat sheet. :D

That was really cute, and a clever way to use the Sunset book. I loved Twilight's exchanges with Sunset and Dougworld Rarity. Now if only we could have seen Rarity's reaction to the flowers.

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Hehe, I'm not much of a Raritwi person but it might eventually get a sequel.

Rarity lets out a sigh as she puts down the magazine wondering what's taking Twilight so long. However she did not have to wonder for too long before her crushes wonderful voice filtered through the castle.

"Rarity could you come here for a moment? I need your help with something."

With curiosity picking at the back of her mind rarity stood and set off at a brisk trot.

Just what is that mare up to? She thought her mind sifting through all the possibilities.

As she turned the corner her mouth went dry and her heart fluttered, before her was a veritable sea of roses filling the hallway, through the door, and spilling out front of Twilights castle. As her eyes locked on to Twilight tears pricked at the corner of her vision as her crush smiled.

"Each petal is a moment I made you wait." She said as she took several steps towards Rarity, "It's time I changed that, would you go out with me?"

Here's a good start for a sequel if you're interested.

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Hehe, does that mean you really really want a sequel or did you just randomly think of this?

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I really want a sequel and the idea for part of a sequel popped up in my head.

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Well I could work on a sequel... Or I could work on seducing success' next chapter...

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Seducing success. It's more important.

Comment posted by davewatsson deleted Feb 27th, 2020
Comment posted by davewatsson deleted Feb 28th, 2020

Unfortunately, I'd be as bad as Twilight. I might need extra-dimensional assistance if I'm ever in a situation like that. Unfortunately, I don't know any doppelganger.

Cute prompt for sure.

That was a great story! I love Raritwi! :twilightsmile:

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