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anon-a-miss. Everyone has left Sunset and she is all alone. But when a mockingjay sings a song, the song from the hunger games(the valley song), Sunset realises she is not alone. There is someone else out there, by the name of maleficent mal bertha.
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Seem like this could be great just need fleshing out abit. Though I have the same problem tbh
This was stupid. I'm sorry I read this and it dumb, it makes no sense and the way it ends....
No, just no, it's too short overall, none of the ideas introduced get to their conclusions, and the ending comes out of absolutely nowhere.
Edit: nevermind the fact the first two chapters just get copied into the third, making the story 664 words longer than it actually is.
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