Hi, I'm GRYFFINDOR123456 and I'm legally an adult. I love my little pony, Equestria Girls and G5 and I also love Harry Potter, Wednesday and Barbie!
after Anon-a-miss(and Sunset commits Suicide), there is a prophecy told. As Sunset's good self has gone, her demon remains. But the prophecy foretells that the Good Sunset will return. But only if she can find true love. And only one girl can do that. A Sciset, PinkieCheese fic
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“Applejack?” asked Applebloom. “Ah’m Anon-a-miss.”
Asked should be said.
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Here, Applebloom was confessing to her big sister about her latest crime.
This story feels rather rushed. Anon-a-Miss feels tacked on, and none of the ideas receive the development they need to hit home. This felt like a summary of a story.
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When I write stories, I often do keep to the plot, but at the same time, summarise it.
The reason is my school work and I don’t always have the time to write brilliant stories. If a teacher gave me 3 triple english lessons (9 singles in total), I’d be able to write a better story.
But as you can see, I don’t have that amount of time. I have small snippets of free time here and there. If you probably are looking for a beauty and the beast, I’m posting my old stories on.
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Then take more time over chapters rather than rushing them. As a college student I'm frequently low on time, so I take several days to work on chapters.
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no, what i mean, is that i’m not a college student, I’m not 18 yet.
I’m 15(which means I still have to do mountains of school work.) Things may be different in America, but in England(where I am writing from), Year 10, 11, 12, 13 students get summer homework, half term homework. I wrote it just before my half term, when I knew I had 10 subjects to do. In Uni in England, you only have 3 subjects. GCSE students have 9-10 subjects. I want to do well in Science and french and Spanish(which may explain why the french in some of my stories is good). I’ve been also having to write an RE essay, which took up most of my time.
Which is why I don’t often write stories like this. I’m starting on a Descendants Story(will be posted later) and that is when you might see a change.
I’m also fairly new to writing, only started about 2 years ago, in the midst of school.
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I'm English too, incidentally. Sorry, thought you were American for some reason.
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that’s alright.
My little pony are often associated with Canada and America(although I’ve been watching the show since i was 7)
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Nice.
Im sorry but sunset has a point that song was so shitty 👁👄👁
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DID I JUST HEAR DECENDANTS :0 I STAN
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Uh... Which Descendants song are you talking about?