I’m back and writing(for a few weeks)
Can anyone posting to my stories add constructive criticism please?

I need to know how to improve- if you don’t, my writing will get worse.

We must support each other in helping fellow writers improve.

I’ll be stopping writing from the 10th May-24th June due to exams. Hopefully that window will give me the opportunity to improve my creative writing skills.

Hi all,
I said A while ago I would stop writing on here for a while. I’m sorry to say I will be deleting some of my stories

Hamlet will be deleted, so will ACOBAB and many of the older stories. Hogwarts year one is staying- but I will be updating it later.

Hi all,
As mentioned in one of my posts, I said I was starting to write a novel. Most of my stories will be on hiatus, apart from Hogwarts year one, which is on my list of to finish stories.

Once I have finished the following(most of them are on Fanfiction.net), I will return to FimFiction and finish Hamlet: The Rightful Sunset Shimmer, A court of Beasts and Beauties and some others.

Here is the list of stories I need to finish:

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finally! after all this time, I’ve updated! Check out the new chapter, Gryffindor Vs Slytherin!

Hey-up!
News!
Firstly, this is going to be a huge project, along with Book 2: Heal what has been hurt, so I’ll be flicking between the 2 stories. True Love 2 will be on hiatus, as will Hogwarts: Year 1.

Secondly, I’ve got a question: In act 2, we meet Rainbow and Pinkie(Rosencrantz and Guildenstern) and I was going to base this moment on Hakuna Matata. Do you think the 2 mares should play a prank on Sunset(Hamlet) when they see her for the first time?

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reason for PMV choices
Phantom of the opera and all i ask of you reprise- original videos are very dark
I see the light- don’t want to repeat the video again

Does anyone know what the last episode of holidays unwrapped is?

Hi all, 

I'm going to bring Sunset back to life in this story! Initially, she was meant to die in this story, but I've decided, she could live a little longer so I could build the romance between Blaise and her. Please tell me if this isn't right. I posted this story on another website too and it seems to be a trend that readers want Sunset alive. 

For those curious, Sectumsempra will be a key spell in this story. Thanks.

Hi everyone!
don’t read this if you haven’t read the first day(Part 2)I killed Sunset off straightaway because she doesn’t play a major role.
If you would like me to change this, please comment below or to the story or send me a PM.

Also, there are references to the other HP books.

hi all
just to let you know this is my first story in a long time. So heads up. Sorry if this is a bit scratchy.