When the CMC got the power to fuse their bodies to turn into an alicorn, they were exited at first, imagining a future of fame and adventure.
Turns out being a superhero is a lot more works then expected, including, but not limited to, drastically reduced sleep, dangerous work, getting portrait as a villain by the media, late homework, love drama, chaos in many, sometimes literal forms and way to many annoying monologues.
As the Crusaders dip their combined hoof into the life of being a superhero, they have to learn how to minimize collateral damage, date the colts they love while sharing a body, handle the fear towards alicorns and master the skill to not fall asleep during villain monologues.
Overall they manage as well as you would expect, and the insurance companies hate it…
Very nice post you have shared here. Such a informative. I loved this story. Amazing story ever.
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I have trouble figuring out if you’re being genuine or highly sarcastic…
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I agree, I have no clue what they are going for. On another note however, I like this so far. I will be tracking and waiting for more.
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Thanks. :D
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You’re a weird Internet entity, but you you made my day more interesting, so I’ll accept it.
(Seriously, this story is up for 1 day suddenly you decide to flood my inbox with studio invites. How did you even find me in this lone corner of the site?.
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I'm in the Pony Fusions group
so I see your story
and I made many groups about Alicorns, PegaCorns, and ponies that are royal or alicorn, but not both
edit: any other group you want me to invite you in ?
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Thanks, but I require no invites at the moment. Maybe another time. 🙂
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That first comment is also from a bott, and therefore is nothing but utter nonsense that's just better to ignore.
It's a start.
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Poor Twilight
Damn, that last bit was dark but it got the point across. Makes me feel bad for Scoots though. Even if nothing has happened having that hanging over your head is terrifying.
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Oh...
So these Criminals are...VERY BAD
Personally, I think the chapter works quite well. Since you're showing what happened instead of having the characters explain it, it feels more like a flashback than an infodump. The only issue I found was a minor spelling error (hoves instead of hooves), but that is not nearly enough to make the chapter less enjoyable.
Also, I love the way they are creeped out by the initial fusion.
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Didn't consider that. Thanks.
Grammar fixed.
How does the Alicorn-form look like?
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I'm open for suggestions honestly. I got a rough idea, but I have yet to put it on paper, so good ideas are welcome...
At current point in time I immagine her with a light orange coat that turns darker down the legs. She has white hooves and horn and orange primary feathers. The rest of the wing matches the coat, and her mane is or 3 colers being red, pink and purple respectivly. The cutie mark is can be seen on the cover image.
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EDIT:
Wait... how does each C.M. look like ?
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Achievement aquired: Get the reference!
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The cutiemarks didn't change from the show. They're simply interpreted differently. Unity's cutie mark is shown on the cover image.
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As villains should be.