Shared Belief

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Pinkie Pie is super excited to stay at Applejack's for Hearth's Warming so she can finally catch Santa Hooves coming down the chimney! Though, when she finds out that Applejack doesn't believe because of a lack of presents, she has a bit of a change of plans.

This was written for the Quills and Sofa's December 19th Speedwriting contest, where the prompt was "December Holiday" and "Belief". Thanks to The Hat Man for editing!

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Camaleao

Camaleao #1 · Dec 23rd, 2020 · 1 · ·

This is so pure and adorable! I could totally see this happening canonically in one of the comics.
The part when Applejack get the doll she wanted as a filly made me tear up, not gonna lie. Great dynamic between Pinkie and Applejack

Just one silly thought crossed my mind in the end: Apple Bloom and Big Mac will be pretty jealous of their sister getting all those gifts :p

Leo1811

Leo1811 #2 · Dec 23rd, 2020 · 1 · ·

Ya know... it's good to have a simple light hearted story before bed. (helps with sleeping don't ya know) so I gotta say this was a pleasant bedtime story.

I've only the one nit pick that being the "coffee shop table" instead of just coffee table but it was so insignificant I almost didn't care. But that wouldve been a diservice.

Good night and merry Christmas

Zapper Frost

Zapper Frost #3 · Dec 23rd, 2020 · · ·

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Just one silly thought crossed my mind in the end: Apple Bloom and Big Mac will be pretty jealous of their sister getting all those gifts :p

There, in front of the hearth, was a pile of presents that almost reached the ceiling. They were each wrapped in a unique paper, with different styles of bows and ribbons and tags, but all of them shared one thing alike; each was marked “From Santa Hooves”, and was addressed to a member of the Apple family.

;)

Camaleao