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Hey, look at the bright side - you didn't end up writing 10,000 words! You still succeeded!
Always stay positive about things, y'know?
how manny wrong worlds are you planning? or is this a case of dusk trusts the portal once and now is going to do it herself
Would they have killed her, or something? Considering how I doubt any forms of the Elements were ever meant to actively murder their target, only either seal them away somehow or make them realise their crimes.
As I've said elsewhere, no-one can "respect" a tyrant; they can "respect" his power and influence, but not the man himself. "Respect" is indeed earned, which is why a tyrant who seemingly acts for the good of his people can manage to hold onto his power for far longer than a cruel tyrant.
No-one can just demand "respect", much like how no-one can demand love.
aaaand Sombra war time. Also WHERE did Dustie go? She didn't splat the wall after Dusk.
Dammit Dusk is just lucky Nightmareverse Celestia is actually not AS Bad as Xenolestia. Now that b&*# is pure malice
Oh, i have a suggestion. What if you combine Sombraverse with the Flim Flam brothers? They're currently pushing for industrialization/running the Apples out of business during the war.
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Nightmare World is done, so then there's the Crystal War and the Changeling Takeover World. After that Duskfall and Starlight will have a final confrontation in the Darkest World before coming home.
Duskfall isn't getting a choice in the next two jumps. There won't be portals. The forces behind this 'field trip' are trying to pull something like "you stepped thru the portal so you agreed to our terms and conditions" bullshit.
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Lightning Dust is fine, she just got dumped in Ponyville instead of in Canterlot with Duskfall. Lightning Dust is going to rectify the situation ASAP and this Rainbow is going to flip.
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to clarify, Xenolestia is the Celestia of the Conversion Bureau universe
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That is certainly something I could do. However, I just can't really see the Flim Flam brothers as being able to do something like that. They're small time con artists. The Flim Flam Timeline never made a lick of sense to me because neither brother has ever shown the amount of forward thinking needed to pull off a more long term con or indeed take over anything.
The only time they came close to something like that was in the Cider Squeezy episode and I have 1001 problems with that episode just in and of itself. The Flim Flam brothers only got as close as they did because all of the Apple family were acting like complete dumbasses.
Also, one should consider that these Worlds aren't results of someone preventing the Rainboom from happening. I highly doubt most versions of Celestia would throw Sweet Apple Acres under the bus just because it's wartime. Actually, I'd think most of them would go about reinforcing such an important source of food during wartime. Even beyond that Applejack has helped save Equestria before, so some small amount of favoritism is only expected.
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I've never actually read the Conversion Bureau stories, but I've heard enough about it that I know that Celestia is completely fucked in the head.
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Alright, that make sense. So, is Duskfall just going to straight up annihilate Tirek then? lool
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im guessing dusk is gonna hunt this force down after or during this forced working vacation. also curious whats going to happen with stralight because in the show it was implyed that she dident see the futures she made but in this she is being dragged along so a look at how she is with this would be interesting.
there is a question i have though for the future and that is what will happen with twilight and tom when they come back? will harmony have bodies ready for dusk and tom? what will tom and twilight rememebr about what happend? will they have a copy of dusks memorys? you dont need to answer but these have been lingering in the back of my mind
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we have to wait and see about spoiler stuff.
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Duskfall still has a little bit of training to do before she's at a level where she can obliterate Tirek. If you mean Sombra... we'll just have to see about that...
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Harmony is going to have nothing to do with Tom and Twilight's return. As for what memories they will have the only thing I'll say on that front is that they will have no recollection of Duskfall's 350 year stint away from Equuis.
Wrong world, again?
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Yep, although hopefully this one doesn't go on for 4 chapters.
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Violence this time, I presume?
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Not too terribly much. Sombra's troops are being mind controlled, after all. Also, I'm pretty trash at writing action scenes, so there's that consideration to make as well.
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I am eager to see sombra's reaction to her.
So on a scale of 1 to OH GODS! Its the Decepticon Justice Division/ Overlord /Xenomorphs/ The Joker/ Barney the singing purple dinosaur would you rate how Sombra will feel when facing off against Duskfall?
How is Rarity handling all of this? On one hoof, Nightmare Moon had Sweetie held hostage, on the other hoof, Nightmare did steep aside and allowed everything to be fixed/on the road to heal.
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I'd recommend that you start with Book one: The Elements of Harmony and the Savior of Worlds, then go on to book 2: The Conversion Bureau: United We Stand. Book 2 is where The Conversion Bureau comes into play.
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Sombra turned his body into Living Darkness. Duskfall is the Alicorn of Darkness. I think it's quite clear who goes where on that particular food chain. Definitely closer to OH GODS, IT'S THE JOKER! Especially when Duskfall learns of what happened to this world's Twilight... The real struggle is going to be finding Sombra thru his decoys and brainwashed troops.
Rarity is never going to be besties with the Nightmare, but she isn't the type to hold a grudge, so once Sweetie Belle is home safe and sound, Rarity will do her best to put the incident from her mind. She might even move to someplace tropical with Sweetie just to get away from it all.
If Dusk failed to use the elements, maybe she could had done like the Doctor and Celestia did with her, throw Nightmare to the future until she calm down and go back to Luna.
Also, know that I think, what happened to the Chrysalis in the Nightmare timeline? In Dusk timeline she was friend of Luna after all, so not sure if she was friend with Nightmare.
In the end is Celestia in Nightmare verse okay? We know she seemed to be affected but Dusk left two days after and one day before Celestia awakened (if she awaken)
Good chapter, though have to say. Awww I wanted to see the threesome
pouring over a map? sombra verse perhaps? well, what's the powerscale in this version? cause, lets be honest...discord was a joke in this one. imagine what she might do to sombra
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The power scale of this dimension will be a little closer to Duskfall's home. How much closer remains to be see
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The chapter was already super long and I didn't want it to drag. There is a very high chance I'll write that scene as a bonus chapter once Shattered Souls comes to a close.
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Celestia woke up the day before Duskfall left. However, Celestia refused to leave her room. Currently she's being consumed with guilt over what she's done, but Luna and the Nightmare will see her through it.
I have something planned for a bonus chapter concerning the subject.
There was no reason for Chrysalis to invade Equestria in its current state. This Chrysalis and Luna aren't friends though.
What reference would that be?
Oh here we go again.
You know, People give Cadence a rash of hate about that scene in the Canterlot wedding where she uses her power to brainwash that arguing couple into loving each other again. Some argue that that removes personal choice, others say its just reminding the couple why they love each other.
No Matter how you see it, its still not as bad as the Elements of Harmony. If you really think about it, they reprogram people. Change how you think. Rewrite or overwrite someones personality. Not to mention that if the nightmare was a separate entity, the elements killed her.
Just a thought.
As for the last few chapters, I think they are well done and I thoroughly enjoyed them. I also applaud the Author for staying off the religion soapbox. Everything in moderation is a philosophy that works extremely well when writing for a mixed readership.
Well done all around
The Monk
“There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
And that's one of the reason we love you.
To be honest still felt a little bit rushed. Maybe there has to be two chapters instead of one, but this way we'll never see the end of this sudden journey through the multiverse. ...not that it's anywhere near, though. ...not that I don't want to see more of it either. I actually do want.
narcissistic self shipping sinners
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