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i can sympathize with writing Zecroa's dialogues. Writing in rhyme takes some effort. You know, I kind of wonder if Celestia/Luna are still alive in this universe. Duskfall can slap Celestia and told her "i'm not your Twilight, you can't apologize to a dead mare"
The only "RWBY" things I know, are that Weiss (the ice girl) starred in a Death Battle once, and that there's a few cuties in that show that unfortunately have personalities I find repulsive. Oh, and that it's made by Rooster Teeth - the same group that owns Death Battle.
so... You don't have time for yourself, you don't have time to sleep, you have "Shattered Souls" "The Road To Heling" and "Romancing the (Martial) Artist" to work, and now you are working in a fourth fic? Seriously, you should check with a doctor
I'm just waiting for chrysalis to try and bribe duskfall with something like slaves or power, one of which she hates and the other she has more than enough of
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I'm not working on the 4th fic. I'm leaving it as a rough draft 1st chapter... of course, I say that, but knowing me, I'll be posting a 2nd chapter next month.... I do see a doctor, but they're incompetent.
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As of this moment I think Celestia is still alive. Luna I'm not so sure on. Although, Celestia's life may just be spared for the sheer value of that suggestion.
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I can sympathize with that. Part of the reason for the rewrite is that everyone is made of cardboard.
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That's going to be a fun scene. I specifically skipped that with Sombra just so I could do it with Chrysalis without doing a repeat.
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that or throw the phrase back at her. "Twilight's dead. So is Cadence. You have alot to think about." and leaves her at the mercy of the anti changelinge army.. Chrysalis can still be usurped and replaced by Thorax, a sympathetic Changeling, but im not sure the anti changeling army will be kind to him.
HHm i think Thorax is what Fluttershy needs to interact to re-awaken her Kindness
I guess this Chrysalis is also not friend with Lulu?
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That is correct.
If you're having trouble with rhyming, might I suggest rhymezone.com? I use it whenever I write Zecora's dialogue or am trying to make up a poem for a spell.
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That is potentially very helpful. Thank you.
Zecora’s tricky to write. Especially if you’re unlucky to include orange and silver. Nothing rhymes with either one.
Is Duskfall able to use Shadow spells from the Negima series? If not, it might be time to experiment with one or 2 of them.
As for the chapter, I do love the banter with Lighting and Duskfall. Never thought I would ever see any kind of Twilight X Lighting ship. Cadence would be so proud of you.
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I've never actually gotten around to seeing the Negima series. If I rectify that sometime between now and Book 3 or 4, then Duskfall will most likely pick up these spells.
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it not that nothing rhymes, its that no words have a pure rhyme in properly spoken single form, but tweaked pronunciation and chained words achieve the same effect
Good luck with the chapters to come. I certainly look forward to them.
Awesome chapter
You could say zecora gave up rhyming because it was slow and times of war make it cumbersome.
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I think "times of war" is overstating it. The swam crushed Equestria. Anyway, it's a valid suggestion, but I've already used the rhymes so it wouldn't make sense to drop them now.
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Kek
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orange rhymes with dorange, a word for wandering aimlessly, Blorange, the name of a mountain in the monmouthshire county/province of southeast Wales, and sporange, the technical term for a fungus' spore sac. It also rhymes with forange, which has one meaning that puts it as a portmanteau of forage and orange, and another, probably unofficial/urban dictionary exclusive definition that I won't be typing up because reading it made me cringe real bad, and it sounds utterly ridiculous and completely silly to be something defined by a single word too.
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I'm sorry! The way the scene panned out I wound up not having Chrysalis offer anything! It was going to be so fun but then it turned into Chrysalis monologuing about how she beat Celestia and thus didn't care about another 'weak' Alicorn.
Considering you're the Alicorn of Darkness and Insanity, and the formerly-sadistic Commander of Nightmare Moon's forces...yeah, pretty villainous.
I wonder how Duskfall's actual friends will react to Lightning, here...
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I am very much looking forward to Rainbow trying to have beef with this Lightning. Come to it, I'm looking forward to both Lightnings meeting.
I can't believe you just made me read that with with my own eyes...
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Twirls Moustache Evilly~!