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I kind of wonder if Duskfalls meets Manny Rivera in town.
But on a serious note, good luck to Duskfall, and hopefully writing the side story actually help YOU out.. maybe writing such things will be a catharsis for you. Hopefully
10368900 Wait... Duskfall in Miracle City!? I’d love to read that!
this is different nice chapter
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I was making a reference joke because of how the doctor describe the town they're dropping Duskfall off at. So i don't think Duskfall will meet El Tigre.. or she'll become El Tigre herself.. lmao
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OK, firstly, I almost never watch TV, so I had to google who the heck you both were talking about. I thought you were talking about Manny the Reaper of Grim Fandango. Good thing I checked...
Secondly, why in the name of all that is holy would you want the currently suicidal, sex crazed, and INSANE Duskfall near a 13 year old boy?! I'm trying to write shitty dark porn here, not have Duskfall open up a daycare!
Writing for The Road to Healing has thus far proven to be slightly cathartic. Of course, that was before this latest bout of bad news. Right now I feel as if my brain is actually boiling. I haven't been this bad in nearly a decade. Man, if I didn't know alcohol was a depressant I'd be seriously tempted to get sloshed right now. Of course, knowing my luck, it might be physically impossible for me to get drunk. Given how my body treats other drugs, I really wouldn't be surprised.
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Next chapter we return to our more or less regularly scheduled tomfoolery with Slice of Life and then Starlight gets dealt with.
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The Doctor wasn't describing the town. He was describing the whole damn planet.
Also, Duskfall is in no danger of going super hero/anti-hero/villainess.
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Ah, yeah i know. I'm a smartass, and I'm not being serious, i like making references and jokes when i see certain phrases. "Miracle City, a spicy cesspool of crime and villainy" which in retrospect is different from 'scum and villainy ' so my b
i wonder if this will go to plan or not? after all the docter said dusk is half human half pony in mind and since she has the info on the doctor she can proberbly guess what is going on after she wakes up and after that how will she react to being on a furure colany where she might have acess to better tec?
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Nah, it's fine, I'm just overreacting.
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Duskfall will be more or less content to play along with The Doctor's plan. So far as she's concerned, she can turn the plan against him in the end and achieve everything she wants. It'll go more into detail in The Road to Healing
As far as better tech is concerned, I'm more or less gonna treat the world like that of Trigun. Set in the future, but for various reasons the tech level is kept a lot lower than the rest of the Universe except in certain things.
10368935 When you put it that way, that sounds horrible. You’re trying to say that the Doctor’s dropping off Dusky at the pony equivalent of Tatooine?
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It's not a complete desert like Tatooine, there are some scattered pockets of more Earth-like environments, but yes, the general sentiment is that it's a shit place with shit people.
i thought it was a fallout area tbh
...Is it a spaceport, per chance? One where someone could hire a skilled pilot, a pilot that made the Kessel Run in less than twelve parsecs?
Isn't Harmonia linked to them? Just ask her.
...So, are we officially making this a Doctor Who crossover now?
I hope things get better -hugs-
Ask Harmonia to just shoot them? They come from her, she should be able to use them.
Also, in the end is The Doctor going to send her to 100.000 years in the future to some desolated place or to another planet or both?.
Well this is a bit extreme.
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Actually Harmonia is just the guardian of the Elements. She has no direct control over them whatsoever.
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Harmonia doesn't control the Elements. She's just their keeper.
Duskfall's misadventures will be documented in the side story The Road to Healing. In Shattered Souls she'll return to Equuis next chapter a very much changed mare.
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Unique problems call for unique solutions
Honestly I feel super bad about what is happening to you in your personal life. I really hope you find your way out of whatever hell you are currently in.
Life has its ups and downs. Sooner or later your situation will turn around for the better somehow. I personally believe in karma even if it tends work at a snails pace at times.
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The bad thing about believing in Karma in my case is that I long ago convinced myself that if Karma does exist, then I'm the grease trap designed to catch as much bad Karma as I can so others might enjoy life. This isn't a new happening, the details are just slightly different each time. From day 1, as far back as I can remember, it's been the same crap in a different package.
So I simply choose not to believe in Karma for what little sanity I have left.
Wasn't until I was 10 that I broke the first time. Then I've just been breaking over and over again. A broken bone that never got the chance to heal right, so it snaps more easily every subsequent time.
i was on board until this chapter, how does sending an insane person to a hellhole make them sane?
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Nope. But they really can't keep Duskfall on Equuis. There's no good solution. I mean, they could've dumped her on a completely lifeless rock, but that would've probably made her more crazy. The Doctor and Celestia are basically in a situation where they're trying to be firefighters against a world wide forest fire and all they have are teaspoons of water. So instead they've moved the fire to where it'll do the least amount of damage.
I think you're looking at this from the wrong perspective. Duskfall isn't trapped on the hellhole. The hellhole is trapped with Duskfall. If The Road to Healing ever gets approved, you'll see more of what I'm getting at.
I do agree with the Doc. It is absolutely the. Worst. Possible. IDEA! (sorry couldn't help myself) And yet at the same time, its their only real option. I mean we are dealing with Joker levels of insanity without the lucidity which allowed him to be somewhat functional. To Indulging her terrible loop of, "I should not exist, therefore I am nothing" until it breaks is a death sentence for any mere mortal. Though as an immortal, well I guess there is a reason why some gods were punished with decapitation to cure their bouts of madness. Overall, its extremely drastic and immoral. If it works, it will at least at have Dusk allow herself to see her as, well her.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
And I wondered how did you manage to fit a sequel without finishing the story. This site really needs some graph building tool to draw connections between stories and particular chapters. I don't want to know what a mess graph for displaced fics will become, but I've seen a few stories already which branched into separate universes and in some cases even merged back or interacted with each other.
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Well, that's some organizational nightmare fuel. Trying to spiderweb all the Displaced fics together like a conspiracy theorist with a cork board. There'd just be this drop down menu of "This Fic is related to this other fic" Without defining how they're related at all. I shiver to just think about it.
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But it will allow to find very long stories broken into a small books. As for example, have you seen Ofolrodi popping up in the recently updated? I decided to check a story with a strange name and... I haven't expected THAT many prequels.
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That is indeed quite a number of prequels
Now that I have managed to pick my jaw up from the floor of that last chapter I am just hoping things have gotten better for you lately as that chapter was darker than a black hole and I am terrified for Dusk's mental state.
Wow got dark fast.