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They'll know it by the end of the Rainbow Rocks chapter. The Doctor will be making an appearance and he'll explain a thing or two. I might also suggest tissues for that scene. I've gotten teary eyed myself just thinking about how I'm going to write that scene. It'll take place just after Duskfall returns to Equestria after stopping the Sirens.
wow i really like how this is going it shows not everything goes as plan
Nice name but what would the Starlight Glimmer episode look like now. Would Dusk take the passive-aggressive approach, the passive approach, or the aggressive approach? Ahhhh; the chaos and yet it ain't Discord's.
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The best laid plans of mice and men oft go awry.
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You'll just have to wait for the chapter to come out to see.
from the way your describing this is seems that your saying that while the souls fused the mind fragmentid into the diffrent bits which made tom and twilight. if the tree is actualy thinking like a distent chessmaster then its likly that the tree will either try "salvage" magic or test her but im guessing dusk wont be too happy about that and if the tree was careless enough to have the fusion happen in the first place what other things it has planned could go badly off track especialy with rainbow rocks soon. on the bright side with both tom and twilights skills and knolage at her disposal she should be in a good spot to figure out how to save tom and twilight or at least bring the tree down to her so she can knock some sense into it. it wouldnt supprise me if she falt out rigged up something to the tree to drain it so she would have the power to fix the mess
Well, I honestly expected more explicatives... meh. I suppose that will be resolved later.
Filly, you've got a long, hard road ahead. My advice? When you've got more issues than a comic shop; get all the help you can handle, and hold on for the ride... it's gonna be bumpy.
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While having Dusk drain the Tree for every drop of power sounds like a good idea, Dusk is going to be a bit gun shy with phenomenal cosmic power for some time to come. Otherwise her overwhelming desire to have Tom and Twilight back might push her to steal the other Alicorn's Magic, which would be...problematic.
You are correct. The Souls are fused, but Tom and Twilight's Minds were basically put in a blender and only pulsed a few times. There are still chunks of Tom and Twilight's cognitive functions floating around in Dusk's head. Not enough to do anything like reconstruct a personality, but enough that she's already having major issues separating what thoughts are hers, which ones are Tom or Twilight's, and which ones are birthed of all three.
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it was that or one other... but i wasn't sure if 'angels among us' was good
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I only added the profanity tag because Duskfall is gonna have a pretty filthy mouth and I don't know how much swearing is allowed before the profanity tag becomes necessary.
As for Dusk accepting help... she's gonna need a swift kick in the cootch before she even thinks about that. Right now her thought process is something along the lines of: "I shouldn't exist, therefore I shouldn't get help".
Fortunately the Elements, Discord, Luna, Chrysalis, and the rest of Ponyville aren't about to let Dusk fester in her own nihilistic brain juices. Celestia may or may not be there too, but it's probably going to be too painful for her to be near Duskfall for a while.
PS: Moon Dancer is honorary Element, forgot to include her in the list. Just roll with it.
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I'm looking forward to where all of this goes.
Sooo. Human violent tendencies and Twiggles intelligence, probably with Tom's acting skill? If so This will be very interesting to see....
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Expect this face to make an appearance more than once when Dusk thinks no one is looking. cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/j88j-1594575490-472762-full
Did I miss something, or did the Friendship Games already happen? Twilight went pony Midnight Sparkle? Or are you not paying attention to your own stories?
I still won't touch the first, because you fucked up beyond repair by having a random human dude, instead being original and have it be a girl, get stuck with Twilight.
I do like this story at least.
i agree with what you said about dusk that always felt to girly for a gender bent name for twilight i much prefer dawn.
ohh Duskfall is a better name choice than i had.... also "Twilight's Fallen Persona" So Twi did had a goth/emo phase before already? XD
Now with Tom's memories Duskfall will instantly call Starlight out in the cutie map episode "Are you a communist?!"
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Pinkie has called each of the Alicorns by a fallen name: Nightmare Moon, Solar Flare, Midnight Sparkle, and Heart Breaker. Then Tom and Twilight kinda ran with it in an exploration of Carl Jung psychology. Like how Twilight is the Maiden, Celestia the Mother, and Luna the Crone kinda stuff. Silver Quill has a video on it, if you haven't seen it before. It was a fun way to spend an afternoon. That Sci Twi will later call her own Shadow Midnight Sparkle has no bearing on Pinkie calling Princess Twilight the same. It is simply a name in keeping in line with Equestrian naming conventions with a suitable ominous tinge for giving one's Shadow a name.
Pinkie might even be inclined to give all the Elements Fallen Names as well: Dark Glamour, Plague Seed, Sundown Slayer, Sky Fury, and Cupcakes (Just because Pinkie is a 4th wall breaking hacker)
However, she's only given such names to the Alicorns at the moment because they're far more likely to fall prey to their inner Darkness with the power to make it a physical manifestation on the world. With Great Power comes Great Responsibly, but absolute power corrupts absolutely.
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Are you calling this one a guy?
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Starlight isn't technically a communist, despite her little cult displaying some communistic iconography. "From each according to ability, to each according to need". By equalizing all ability, Starlight is actually spitting directly in the face of one of the facets of communism. Also, Starlight is the dictator of her cult. Technically communists believe in a stateless, classless existence where no one is above anyone else. The only one with power should be the government and everyone is part of the government. There are other nuances that put Starlight's ideology apart from communism, but I doubt you want to read a full dissertation.
As a student of History, Tom would be very much aware of these subtle differences, even if Dusk might kneejerk and call someone a dirty commie.
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That makes more sense. Not the names of course (except Midnight Sparkle and Nightmare Moon of course), but the rest does.
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ha no however Don sounds the same when spoken but i went with the dawn spelling since that seems more in line with a pony name
side note your last story built up that winter solstice deadline so much but for the twist fusion at the end. Have you dropped that plot point or will it come up again somehow?
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The Winter Solstice will still be important, but Duskfall is the only one who will continue to look forward to the Winter Soltices and is going to catch hell for what she has planned for that day.
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I'm the guy who named his black cat Blackie. Don't come to me for awe inspiring names.
Now I'm wondering how the whole Starlight Glimmer time travel aspects will influence the plot, since that technically gives you access to an "unfused" Twilight variant.
Let's you do all kinds of possible things (duplicate the fusion twice and then use the Twilight soul as a template to filter out the Tom bits in one and the Twilight bits in the other, and leave a copy of the fusion, for example so all 3 can survive). Or just the ability to do all kinds of fun things (well cheat really).
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Starlight won't get the chance to screw around with time. At least, not in the same context as in the show. Time Traveling Starlight will happen because early Starlight had zero self control when it came to Magic, but for different reasons and to different effects. It'll also probably not happen until Book 3, unless I find reason to reschedule certain events.
If you think Starlight Glimmer, wanted mare, is gonna sneak into Ponyville repeatedly with the friend network they have, even excluding the Changelings, you have a surprise in store.
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You're right about the distinctions, though despite the differences in enactment, Starlight's little cult seems to mimic what happens in real life communism, where everyone 'magically' becomes as bad as the worst member of the lot, and it goes downhill from there. (Given that the food seems horrible at best in 'Our Town' and construction was questionable, I think it's safe to say they became as bad at everything as the worst pony there) of course, I suspect that in Equestria Communism would actually be viable long-term as most inhabitants seem honorable enough to maintain decent work ethic despite the set pay whether or not you're working, which is where Humans start causing trouble.
She could stay in Canterlot or in a hotel, just to say "F*ck you Tree"
And here I am, dang it now I have to wait for more chapters
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Tempting, but Dusk wants to stay in Ponyville to stay close to Tom and Twilight's friends and where the action is at. Staying at a hotel... Ponyville hotels aren't the greatest and it would require spending more money than strictly necessary, so Duskfall doesn't want to do that. She could've bunked up with, say, Fluttershy, but imposing on friends that she doesn't even consider to be her friends, but the friends of her originals, rubs her very much the wrong way.
Given all that and an underlying idea that the Tree owes her / Tom and Twilight an insurmountable debt, Duskfall is more than willing to squat in the palace until she can get Tom and Twilight back and those two can decided where to move to.
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Ah, the eternal curse of the avid reader.
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What about Discord? He could snap the fingers and recreate the Treebrary or a new house if Dusk asked
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I will admit the thought hadn't crossed my mind. However, any house created by Discord's Chaos Magic would likely be impossible for Duskfall to work in. Trying to do controlled experimentation in an environment seeped in Chaos is just asking for faulty results.
i keep thinking that discord can help with everything but keep getting remindid of his limits and keep getting frustratid trying to think of ways around it that could happen in the future but then i had a thought of what if discord could help through the ones around him as if the ponys can use harmony magic then chaos magic should be possible and with discord being the spirit of chaos he would be the best teacher. im pretty sure this wont happen but i just like the idea of the tree being all high and mighty and getting shocked when the ponys no longer trust or have faith in her and would rather use chaos and trust discord then her ( i assume the tree is a her but i dont rememebr if their was a definet answer to that but since it shows up as a crystal twilight in the young 6 test thing and is supposed to be discords opposite then im guessing it is a she)
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I usually use feminine pronouns when talking about the Tree. Discord is a very masculine character, so obviously his opposite would be feminine. It doesn't hurt that whenever the Tree communicated directly in the show, she took Twilight's form.
Already exists in the communist village
Won't they be surprised to find out one of their possible names already exist. Starlight Glimmer.
tumblr crisis averted, thank you dusk